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Nothing (Chapter 1)

Creative Created on 4-28-08 Views(87) Story Rating G

   In a foggy world, nothing around you. It's like your in a white paper box. You feel nothing, see nothing, taste nothing, everything is just nothing. Like your dead. Eventually the sound returns but they aren't very pleasant. You hear struggles and weeps of help, a female weeping. You eyes begin to see but very little, you see a girl, probably about teenaged years, her clothes ripped and soaked with warm, red blood. She's chained to the wall, struggling to get free, but the weird thing is, there is no wall. She can't scream but you can tell she's trying, her eyes squinted and crying, with the gag over her mouth it makes the scream tiny wimpers. There's patches of skin missing, as if somone is slowing skinning her bit by bit. The missing skin patches are in a bucket next to her. There's blood everywhere. You don't know what to do. Then you hear a familiar voice.

   "Don't save her." the voice is hissy but somehow familiar. You can't quite tell who it is. The voice sounds like a man but who can really tell. You forget about the noise and try to help her, but then you relize your not even there. Your body no longer excist. It's like your the white, foggy, air that surrounds this place. Are you dead? Maybe. Or maybe you never were living.

   Then you snap back into reality. You laying on the street, downtown of some city, in a alley. Your bleeding from your head and mouth and you can't even remember what is going on. You can't even remember who you are or what your doing. Then a vision flashes through you eyes. You see yourself slowly falling from a building, arms open, faceing your back at the ground. You body slowly slides down, as if there's barely gravity, then gravity tricks you and pulls you down with great force. Now here you are, laying here on the ground, with a few bruises, cuts, and injuries, but your fine. No broken bones, no serious or fatal wounds, nothing. But, unfortunatly you've lost a lot of blood, your laying in a pool of it but you don't feel dizzy. You feel 21 stories and yet, you're perfectly fine. Eventually a boy spots you on the ground staring up at the sky blankly, he walks to you and studies you. He also seems to be in beginning teen years. He's wearing some jean shorts, black shoes, and a red shirt with a cap on is head. He's carrying a skateboard with him.

    "Dude! What happened?" The boy says. You stare up at him confused. Then he says your name and then a vision flashes again. This is Gerad, he likes it when you call him Rad. He's been your best friend sence you moved into this town a few months ago. You two love to hang out and skateboard together. 

   "Uh... I like totally did a trick on my skateboard and feel." You say, not really sure of what to say.

   "Sweet! But where's your skateboard?" Rad asks you, looking around at the ground, trying to find it.

   "Um... I'm not really sure. Can you help me up?" You ask him. Your buddy lends you a hand and you study him some more. He has blonde hair that goes to his shoulders and green eyes. He has a few marks on his face and body from skateboard injuries too. You walk around the area, searching for the skateboard you "lost" in a "totally awsome trick". The sun starts going down and you guys eventually give up on it.

   "Dude! My 'rents are making dinner tonight, want to join us?" Rad asks you.

   "Sure..." You say kind of nervous. You can hardly understand him but you play along with it, hopefully you can catch up on it.

   "Awsome! Oh and don't worry, my mom isn't making those Baked Alaskas again, do you remember last time when she almost burnt down the house?" Rad laughs. You laugh along and another vision goes through of Rad's mom freaking out about the curtains on fire, you laugh harder at the sight, not really knowing why it seems funny to you. You and Rad walk over to his house. Your still very confused about you life but your hoping that sticking with him will help you remember... To be continued

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On May 7th 2008 KazWolf Said :
KazWolf thats awesome! I'LL READ THE NEXT
On May 2nd 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said :
ridinbitch0807 wicked cool. i loved it! kmp!
On April 30th 2008 reeny3 Said :
reeny3 OMg i loved dis. if it was a book id probably read dis. i liked da boog 'the vampire diaries' by 'L.J. Smith' da bes book i ever read so far
On April 29th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x interesting... I wonder what'll happen next??
On April 28th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said :
vampirefreak61 You can be a guy or a girl, Rad just likes calling you Dude. Don't freak out about it if your a girl or if you can't relate to the main character.