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Sweetly Torn Apart Ch.20

Horror

Created on 12-3-07

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Chapter 20Jasper picked up his useless form and held a tree for support. His heart hurt worse than any wound he had ever endured. It beat madly against his chest and threatened to escape from his rib cage. He grew his claws and just stared at them. Dark and sharper than any knife he held his claws inches from his face. He ripped lines across his cheeks and felt the blood work it’s way down his neck. Jasper doubled over when he thought of kissing Claire, her wild hair tangled around his fingers, his hand lightly settling on the small of her back. He cringed and cried out in anger. What was she doing? The game of hers was ridiculous and cruel. He swiped his claws across the belly of a fallen tree trunk. The trees' inners spilled out, covering the ground in moss and spider webs. The tree changed form and settled for Claire’s form lying on the ground. The moss turning to her blood and guts…Jasper fell to his knees and picked up her hand. In his palm, her hand turned back into a branch from the tree. Angry and grateful he ripped the tree from the ground and threw it as far as he could muster. It sailed threw the air and hit another tree, instantly taking it out with force. Jasper cried and buried his face from sight. He was confused and…scared of loosing Claire forever. He fell to the ground and laid in a fetal position. He read and reread his letter he had placed in her locker and cried. Claire… I love you. I love the form you change

into, your lightly colored hair when it blows in the wind, I love the smile that curls your lip when you see prey in your midst, and most of all, I love you Claire! I know you want nothing to do with me, but, I persist. I swear when I first saw you, that an angel had dropped from the heavens. Please Claire, give me a chance.

Jasper He crumbled the letter and shoved it back into his pocket for safekeeping. It was stupid to pursue her any longer. Claire made it very clear that she wanted nothing to do with him and it made his heart ache. Whether she chose Damien or not he would love her forever! Jasper felt dumb for his loyalty and he threw another trunk away from him. The deafening crashes making him feel better. Jasper stopped mid step and listened to the sounds around him. He heard the faint whisper of blue birds and deer stalking quietly through the woods. Jasper licked his lips and wondered whether he should hunt. His stomach grumbled and cried out to him for some form of nourishment. He smiled and let the change overcome him. The exhilaration of his bones breaking and the tiny hairs that sprouted out of every pore made him feel alive and one with nature. He knelt and precariously sniffed the ground. Wonderful smells wafted from animals that had long past this very spot. Jasper grinned an inhumanly smile and forced himself to move in the direction of his next kill. He hopped and jumped in the air as gay as a jackrabbit. However, in the back of his mind Claire’s touch had planted itself in his subconscious making it much harder for him to entirely enjoy the hunt. Jasper’s eyes darted from tree to tree searching for any sign of movement. Finally, his nose caught a slight wisp of deer moving ahead of him. There only seemed to be one but it was enough to excite the fire that burned in him to kill. Jasper stealthily moved closer and peered through a knot in a tree trunk. He watched the creature bend and eat grass like a cow, chewing it from side to side. The deer rigidly stood still and listened for movement. It settled itself and ate more grass. Jasper decided that this was the perfect moment to strike; he inched forward slightly and leaped into the air, gaining momentum. Jasper threw his body weight into the side of the deer and went crashing with it threw the brush. He sank his teeth into the side of its neck and glistened with joy as the blood excited his taste buds. He wanted more! He bit deeper and more savagely. The deer hadn’t a chance in the first place. Jasper ripped the deer to shreds and ate his fill. Blood and fragments of fur limply hung from his mug. He flicked his elongated tongue over his bloody teeth and licked the remaining pieces off. Slowly his mind forced gears and he lost the glint of joy in the eye of a predator. Jasper turned back and licked his fingers. Little moons of encrusted blood hid under his nails. He sighed, completely satisfied with his kill. Jasper ripped a chunk from the side of the carcass and shoveled it into his mouth. He licked his fingers again and laughed. His mind tingled as someone pocked at the corners trying to reach him. Jasper opened his mind and listened. Claire! What does she want? “Jasper please come back I need your help!” He bit his lower lip in confusion. Should he ignore her or leap like a good little doggy? Jasper tore his attention away from his kill and ran to Claire. She needed his help, there was no denying that. He’d feel terrible if she was hurt. Jasper ran fast through the trees his thighs pumping, full of energy. I'm coming for you Claire…again.

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On December 24th 2007 kiss2378 Said :

	Sorry I have been gone so long but i just got caught up on this story and I love it! I really really cant wait for the next and I really hope she ends up with jasper. Please let me know when u write more.

On December 3rd 2007 Valianteni Said :

	Nice...I feel bad for Jasper...this kind of reminds me of the old days with you, me, and corey. I love this Chapter nevertheless.

On December 3rd 2007 valiantvivian Said :

	I've been messing around with fonts and sizes but I never get one to work the way I want...If you know of one that's perfect Please for the love of god let me know!!! I'm dying here.

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