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Sweetly Torn Apart Ch. 16

Horror Created on 11-11-07 Views(78) Story Rating G

Chapter 16 – Steve’s Mistake

            Damien cautiously sat across the room from Steve and carefully assessed the situation. There was definitely something wrong with Steve but he couldn’t put his finger on it. He watched Steve’s slow but graceful movements. Steve’s hand lightly touched the dark red curtain that primarily hung over his windows, shadowing out the prying eyes of neighbors.

            “So Damien,” he grinned from ear to ear, “What’s up?” He laughed at his own words and shook his head. Steve ran a finger down the curtain, tearing a long deep gash in the fabric. Damien swallowed hard and tensed for something bad. “I don’t think that’s a very good idea, Damien!” he coyly tilted his head and leaned forward “I’ve got a bedtime story for you.”

            He paced the living room stopping every so often to touch and ruin something with his nails. Damien sat tensed the entire time, thinking to himself. Is he a werewolf? He just couldn’t see Steve giving up humanity for being a creature of the night. It would potentially cramp his style! Damien quietly laughed. “Is there something funny?” he flicked to within an inch of Damien’s face, “Damien?” Damien gasped and fell back on the couch.

            “What the hell are you Steve?” Damien shook from the shock of it and he felt his muscles curl inhumanly. The change was coming whether he liked it or not and there was nothing he could do. Steve had Damien trapped, and things seemed to get worse with every mood swing Steve experienced.

“What am I?” he placed a hand on Damien’s trembling shoulder, “Damien you surprise me…you really do. I gave you too much credit, way more than you deserved.” He thought for a second or two and replied, “Hmm…I’ve been debating with myself at the answer to that question. I know it but…something in the back of my mind argues with me that I'm something more!”

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On November 12th 2007 Valianteni Said :
Valianteni I love Steve right here...Playing with Damien's head in a sadistic way! It's kinda funny.
On November 11th 2007 Redneck151 Said :
Redneck151 ok good but why did your posted the chps backward :?
On November 11th 2007 beachparty57 Said :
beachparty57 ......love it!!