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Cause of Death
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 Created on 2-23-08
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 Story Rating G
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Something as simple as a question.
I ask him one favor. He takes it to the next level.
If I would have known.
The changes I would have made.
There's no point with wallowing in the past.
But what else is there to do while being eternally damned.
He told me to write. When I asked him what I should do with the rest of eternity he said write. I might write about how it came to this, but no one would believe. They'd all think it was just another story from a writer with a vivid imagination. I could make some good money off of it. I mean my story is pretty exciting. Lots of events intertwined with each other mixed around waiting for the one experiencing it to figure out how they fit together.
Damn him.
Those moments in time. Still stuck in my brain. So many heart shattering and a few full of that painful thing called love. A very few.
Why did he listen to me?
Why?
Of course I did ask. He was just being kind, I guess.
Still, mind boggling.
I guess your curiosity has overwhelmed you by now. What could this strange girl be rambling on about? You could even be thinking I have a mental illness. It's okay. But I don't, I'm perfectly...well some where near perfectly normal.
I feel generous. I'll inform you of my entrance into the dark. Will you listen?
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On February 28th 2008 mkkelsey Said : | |
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sweetness.
lubbed it.
kmp. |
| On February 25th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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i agree with everyone. it sounds really good. keep me posted:]P |
| On February 24th 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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i loved it kmp |
| On February 24th 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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yeah this does sound good,kmp =] |
| On February 24th 2008 Aaquaian Said : | |
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Lol, I did indeed like it. I liked how you ran the thoughts on, making this a good attention grabber of an intro. A very good job, please keep me posted on this. |
| On February 23rd 2008 gahmmmblah Said : | |
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sounds really good. kmp please.. |
