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Outside the Sectors
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 Created on 1-14-08
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"Fuck you."She screamed as she walked out of their little shack. It was another argument with her parents. I wouldn't blame her. Seeing as how her parents beat her and take turns screaming at her. I would hate them too. Actually, I do, but I can't do much about it. I can merely observe. It's not my fault that she chose them when she was little. It probably had something to do with the beautiful porcelain doll they bribed her with. The ruby red lips, the shiny black eyes, and the long blond curls.
They were the only couple that the government had forbidden from joining the other couples at Adoption Day, but some how they had snuck past the security and fooled a poor little girl into choosing them as her parents. If only I could turn back time. I would fall among the crowd and whisper in her ear that the doll would only last a few days after she had received it. I would say that her "parents" would treat her like a slave and would leave brown and purple bruises on her soft pale skin. But this story is not about what I think she should have done. It's about what she is doing, now at age fifteen.
She walked down her street and followed it up to the Red Gates to which she would go through on her way to school. She was by far the most intelligent fifteen year-old girl that lived in her sector, which wasn't saying much for no one in the Black Sector had an education. You see, The City was like a nesting doll in the shape of a box. The smallest box was in the center and it was the White Sector. It was were the government resided and made all of their decisions. The next one was the Yellow Sector which contained all the scientists. The Orange Sector was next and it held the entertainers and the artists. Red followed and it contained every school and teachers for all ages. After was the Brown which held the people who had money, but they used it on themselves. Then came the Black sector which held everyone else who didn't have enough money to go to school. The only way to get out of the Black was to go to school and the only way to go to school was to either pay or pass a test. Luckily, Madison,the lovely girl this story is about, was able to pass that test.
She is now on her way to that school in the Red section. Her freshly cut black hair bounced lightly just above her ears as she sulked towards Kensington Academy. She hated, no, she loathed how the days always seemed happy when she felt like dieing. Her parents had screamed at her this morning about her new haircut. She had told them she cut it so they wouldn't be able to pull her back to into the room to scream at her more. She was happy she finally had the guts to tell them off, but she knew she'd have to pay when she got home.
She walked through the academy gates and immediately felt all eyes drift towards her head. It was against academy rules to attract attention to yourself, so she walked straight towards the office to fill out her paperwork. As she walked a young girl her age walked up beside her.”Hey.”
“Hey, Beliz.” Beliz hadn't even looked at Madison's hair. Instead she continued to walk beside her friend. Beliz was the only friend of Madison's because no one dare talk to the girl from the Black. Madison didn't mind. She understood. She was a lower class and she wasn't worth having as a friend, so of course she was surprised when Beliz started talking to her.
“I like what you did to your uniform.” Madison had been sitting in the back of the class reading a book called, The Damned,when a strange girl with hot pink hair had walked up to her.
“Thanks.”She replied. The uniform was normally a dark green plaid skirt with a white polo and a dark green jacket with black loafers and white knee high socks. Instead today she wore a black polo and the plaid skirt with black suspenders hanging down from the sides and black boots that reached mid-calf with black tights.
That day everyone stared at her as well.
“Will Madison Edwards and Beliz Rivera report to the Main Office, immediately?!”
From then on the two talked even though Beliz had to change her hair to a more subtle color. Beliz' family lived in the Orange, so her parents encouraged her to be different even if it was against the school policy. Her parents just laughed when the Headmaster told them what their daughter had done. Madison couldn't help, but envy Beliz a little.
“Did you hear that Professor Hagins's class has to go on a class trip?”Beliz said to break the silence.
“Wait, aren't we in his class?”
“Uh. Yeah.”
“Damn. Where to?” They were almost to the office when Madison saw a sign on the office window.
“Botanical Gardens.”They both said together.
“Yeah, how'd you know?” asked Beliz.
Madison justed pointed at the poster and walked in without saying anything else.
Just an idea should i continue it??
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On January 21st 2008 individulsong Said : | |
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You should continue!! I love it! |
| On January 20th 2008 nickjonson Said : | |
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wow. this is great. I like how you are using a certain type of narrative (im not sure what the name is, but I know what ur writing has a name for it). lookiing good |
| On January 17th 2008 unknownwolfie Said : | |
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thts really kool ... i lik it ;) keep it goin |
| On January 15th 2008 ha7 Said : | |
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It's sounds like it will be a wonderful story line, and I would love to hear how you continue it, please continue. Keep me posted as well if you can,thanx. |
| On January 14th 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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kmp |
| On January 14th 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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DOPE!!!!kmp =] |
| On January 14th 2008 mkkelsey Said : | |
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uh...okay this is freaking awewome! i love the idea!!!
i can relate to the story too.. |
| On January 14th 2008 tece26 Said : | |
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I like it! Great writing style and interesting concept. Please do continue and let me know when you do! |
