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Just Friends 2

Creative Created on 8-18-08 Views(239) Story Rating G

Part 2:

 

Jake: dude! What the hell are you doing? Why did you leave her?

 

For dramatic effect I said

 

Uric: what the heck are you talking about?!? you think your in a movie or something. You should kiss the ground she walk on for accepting to talk to you and now your leaving her?!?! Help me understand

 

Ok ok ok I was all over the place, she was getting bored and I knew if I stayed one more second. I am going to blow it so I thought I'll take a walk get my self together and get back to her; take off that shyness jacket off

 

Uric: shyness jacket, I don’t see you wearing any

 

Jake: dude! You don’t know, he wears like an invisible jacket; its in his head so he pretend to take it off whenever he is tensed or unable to do something to have the courage to do it

 

Amen! I said

Uric: you guys are nuts! I don’t even know why I hang around you two

 

Jake: because we make you look good! Ha ha ha

 

Compared to us your like the king of the universe; okay am getting back to her; wish me luck guys

 

I walked toward her smiling after I took my shyness jacket off; grabbed the chair flip it backward and sat on it. She just looked at me with her mouth open

 

Watch it your going to catch a flea, you don’t want that do you I said as I let out a laugh, she realized what she was doing and just smiled

 

So you’re a hot shot now huh? What did you have?

 

Ooh already started the investigation; I thought that happens after we get married and I laughed she did as well

 

Marriage huh!? You do think a lot of your self don’t you

 

I wouldn’t say that but whatever help you sleep at night as I winked at her

 

She was still looking at me puzzled but I knew she realized I am different! I was so excited but I had to act all cool and stuff

 

So you're going to tell me your name or should I guess?

 

Oh well guess

 

Your name is hmmm Tornado?

 

She laughed well close enough got to give you that

 

I smiled oh really! You're destruction all right

 

Oh really? How so?

 

I have met you for like 15 minutes now and I am already a mess!  

 

oh man I am totally killing it; I cant tell her I am a mess its so desperate; back up plan!

 

My name is Bond, James Bond

Bond?  Really?!

 

Okay well you can call me Keith though

 

She laughed hard oh my god too funny

 

I smiled finally that’s a good sign; so the whole night passed with us talking she was way too comfortable with me which I thought was good. I didn’t want time to pass at that moment but it did; way faster than we thought it would so here I was on her doorsteps after I gave her a ride with my Mustang okay fine it wasn’t a Mustang but it did sound like one; so back to her place; So I knew I have to kiss her; but I didn’t know how; like attack her, or hold her hands until she stops talking, while I was in the middle of my chaos and my thoughts are all over the place; I realized I wasn’t listening to her

 

So what do you say?

 

Uhm about what?

 

She laughed coming over you silly

 

Oh my god! Did she actually ask me into her apartment from our first date! Wow that’s got to be good wooooo hoooo I couldn’t hide the happiness that was all over my face  

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On October 19th 2008 13kc Said :
13kc love it great work kmp
On September 30th 2008 xSarahScandalx Said :
xSarahScandalx haha really funny. i love it. please write more soon!!
On August 23rd 2008 username685 Said :
username685 too funny kmp please
On August 20th 2008 AndiKHF Said :
AndiKHF kmp
On August 19th 2008 DarkLake Said :
DarkLake Awesome story! Write the next one soon!
On August 19th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 How adorable! Keith's funny! GOD BLESS YOU ALL!!!
On August 19th 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said :
imtheonlyme4 i love it it's so funny!!!
On August 19th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 This is funny KMP!!!
On August 19th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess i really like how u started using their names and i cant wait to see where this story ends up! i think ill subscribe.
On August 19th 2008 tece26 Said :
tece26 What happened to my comment? Oh well... I think this is HILARIOUS! So much fun to read, and I can't wait to read the next one. You have to hurry and write the next one soon!!!