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Chapter 27:
“Is it true?” shoving the picture and the check copy
He tensed and kept moving in his chair; and then got himself together
“Is it true!?!” she asked again with a crying shout
He looked down at the floor and nodded
“baby, you need to understand something” as he sat next to her trying to hold her
“get out!” she shouted “don’t get near me!”
“Babe, babe…” he said trying to calm the rage she was having
“how much money you need? Tell me ?” she said
“oh my god, I cant believe I gave my heart to a man whore!” she have never in her life misbehaved the way she did that way, as she kept cursing him asking him to leave, while he took it all and kept his silent; she stopped to continue crying, her head was hurting from all the shouting,
‘are you done?” he said calmly, she hated that about him; it’s like he doesn’t really care!, Which drove her crazy
“Let me explain now, please?”
“GET OUT!” she shouted trying to push him away “ I don’t want to hear anything from you! I don’t want to see you! Just leave me alone please!!! Is it too much to ask?”
“Baby, just let me explain and then I will leave just listen!” he shouted
“I am not proud of what I did for life, but what we had was real; that’s why I couldn’t help it but come back, I couldn’t help falling in love with you from the first day we met; I know how much you gave me and I will understand if you don’t want me in your life; because I am nothing but a loser, but give me a chance; that’s all I am asking for, let me make it up to you; you cant imagine how much sleepless night I’ve had trying to figure out a way to admit this to you, to get it off my chest…….”
“oh poor Kevin, I am so horrible to you. Are you done?” she said trying to get her strength back
“baby, please try to understand, ugh … I love you! And I swear I will do anything for you, I am sorry if I failed you, but the thing is, I wouldn’t have met you otherwise. And I am glad I have met such a unique spirit, can you ever forgive me? I will spend the rest of my life making it up for you; I promise!”
“are you done?” she said wiping away her tears,
“ I … I .. I just need you to understand, I am not proud of what I’ve done, and I am really sorry, I swear if you take me back I’ll love you, spoil you and everything, please you have a big heart, find a way to forgive me”
“done yet?”
“yes” he said
“okay then get out now; I don’t want to see you ever again. And if you really love me like you said; leave me alone for God sake!”
By then all of Nancy friends were at the door and it was a big scene because of all the shouting, he stood up,
“sure baby” he said in a weak voice and walked away into that door.
Right then I realized I just kicked out the most important and valuable thing in my life in able to secure my heart again. What an expensive price we pay to avoid being hurt… I can live without him, but life isn’t the same.
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| On August 4th 2008 readaholic7 Said : | |
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mo that cant be the last one you need to make a sequal that her and kevin get back togther for good come on please it cant end like that he loved her to much |
| On July 16th 2008 lilshithead061 Said : | |
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OMG SHE DIDNT! |
| On July 16th 2008 Baillie010 Said : | |
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OMG! ur kidding me! NOOOOOO NOOOO NOO!! im like rosebrugh...will there be a sequel cause i think there should be! he can't just give up! =( *sigh* loved the story by the way! the ending WAS good but just soooo sad! very good job! *two thumbs up* =D |
| On July 14th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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i liked the youtube video and i liked the ending.will you make a sequel?becuz it seems like you didnt end this one |
| On July 12th 2008 username685 Said : | |
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OMG NOOOOOOO!!!! I cant believe its over. T-T so sad. i enjoyed reading this story oh so much. and the youtube video was great. ^_^ let me know when you have more stories |
| On July 12th 2008 13kc Said : | |
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oh my gosh that was like the best story i've ever read i loved it expecialy the end it shows us that in real life there isnt always a happy ending i loved it =] |
| On July 12th 2008 tece26 Said : | |
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It does sound like he could have told her more and faught his cause more but he didnt, he just gave her what she wanted and left. Then she realizes she let him go to easy there is no way to get him back. It is sad but happens so much like that in life we dont always get the happy ending, you look back and realize you should or shouldn't have done something. ugh... I think the ending is perfect. leaves you wondering. |
| On July 12th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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i hope they meet again sometime, it seems like they didnt really have closure, like he didnt explain the whole story. |
| On July 12th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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awww this was a REALLY good ending but it was really sad too. i like the youtube thing you made that was cool. your an awsome writer and please keep me posted on any future storiesā„ =] |
| On July 12th 2008 tece26 Said : | |
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Wow!! And I loved the video you had left on my page to tel me this was up. Amazing babes! Great story YOU ARE SO GOOD I cant wait until your next story. |
| On July 12th 2008 tece26 Said : | |
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NOOOOOOOOO!! Thats it thats the end?? But he left thats so sad! She changed so much from the beginning, she got stronger and its all because of him. And now she isnt going to forgive him? I think this was an amazing story baby. And its unique because it was the only love story on here where the girl ends up alone in the end. I LOVED IT! |
| On July 12th 2008 unknownwolfie Said : | |
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I would like to thank you all for reading my story and your wonderfull support without you guys I wouldnt have written this ... and I would really apperciate it if you take 5 more minuates of your time and write me a long comment .. I love those ... :) again thank you |


