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Just Friends -1-

Romance Created on 5-10-08 Views(442) Story Rating G

  • Ever since I laid my eyes on her I just knew she was the one that’s going to complete my life. I was with my buddies Jake and Uric. I told the guys to check her out and tell me how to get her,
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  • J: No way! She is way out of your league dude!
  • U: You know when I said anything is possible; this girl is not anything at all.
  • M: I don’t care what you guys say, she is mine and that’s that! I want her so are you going to help me or what!?
  • Uric: what the heck, it's better to try and fail than to never try at all.
  • Me: That’s my man! What about you J are you in?
  • J: you guys are crazy; and crazy IS my middle name, and you all need your pimp
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  • Great, so now we needed a plan we sat down at the bar watching her refusing one guy after the other, and they all wanted what I want her! I shouldn’t do what all the other guys were doing, I should be different which added more pressure; because the guys were doing great and it wasn’t working. I am a regular guy why would she choose me. So I told myself to back off and forget about it
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  • Me: I don’t know guys, maybe your right, why would she want me anyway.
  • J: dude! Your giving up way too easily, okay there are 2 girls around her and we are 3 guys, so if each one of us pick a girl u would have her open for you to score!
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  • Me: dude! I am freaking serious its not a football game damn it!
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  • J: ha ha ha you gotta admit this shit was hilarious
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  • Uric: okay, back I just finished a phone call and I know exactly what to do,
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  • I looked at him with puzzled eyes, and nodded
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  • He lead the way toward the girls and I wasn’t even prepared I didn’t know what to say or do so I stopped and went back to my chair. While they both went there and they all started laughing together then I saw Uric pointing at me and she followed him with her eyes and looked at me! I cant describe what happened to me when she did. I felt a chill run throw my body and the heat all over my face blushing, sweating, you name it. Then she smiled and waved, I smiled like a total jerk trying to act cool and all but I was far beneath it. I don’t know what he was telling her but it seemed to be working; she was smiling and laughing. The guys came back and I was full of questions, but I couldn’t say a thing I just looked at them puzzled and my eyes said it all.
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  • Uric: who is your man!?
  • Me: My guess is YOU! What happened?? What did you tell her? Why was she looking at me? Why were you guys laughing!?
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  • J: calm down dude!? She is coming over! Wooo hooo for you dude … We got you this far the rest is up to you!
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  • I literary jumped of exacitness; and then had a panic attack! What the heck!? What would I say?! Till my buddy Jake put his hand on my shoulder and whispered in my ears: just be your self! And don’t mess it up!
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  • GREAT! Now that’s what I needed! He is adding more pressure
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  • Uric: the secret is don’t push it, let it come to you; let her talk… ask more than you answer, be funny not too much, and uhm flirt a little bit. But listen I don’t much time to coach you she might come over any minute. But put in your mind she hears oh your beautiful all the time and love your eyes etc, heads up CHEESY! So you might wanna say something like this jean shows the beauty of your thighs
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  • J: good one Uric; but no you don’t wanna say, it shows your pervert plus she is wearing a skirt; uhm look at her in the eyes and tell her baby I want to push you over that wall and suck your lips …
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  • Uric: ha ha ha … are you trying to get him killed
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  • J: that would be funny, wouldn’t it ha?
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  • Me: GUYS! Focus! ME! …. What am I suppose to do; oh great there she is
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  • As she was walking over to our table Uric whispered smile and I did, she smiled back as the guys disappeared
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  • "hey there, what's up?"
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  • I smiled with confidant and looked up and said
  • "the roof"   and I laughed by myself, she just looked at me funny, smiled heavily
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  • "I see" she said
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  • I got even more excited and said "Me to!"
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  • "Excuse me?"  She looked at me puzzled
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  • "I can see to… see we already have something incomn"
  •  Shit! Am messing it up, totally killing it. God please let me say something smart 
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  • "So, how are you doing?" I thought I will play it safe; boring but safe, she smiled and said "fine, you?" and started looking at her watch, I bet she was trying to figure an excuse to leave, ugh pressure! pressure!
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  • Say something smart! Com'n do it save the situation. I wished that I could pause the whole situation and take my time; think about what is the perfect thing to say and then I killed it
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  • "Your jeans make your thighs look good"
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  • OMG! Did I just say that! No way!!!!!
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  • "Excuse me?"
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  • I took the tissue and put it over my sweaty forehead while looking at the table "uhm I mean your skirt look nice"
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  • "Thanks" she said then let out a little laugh more like a giggle but if I say it’s a laugh then it's a laugh!
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  • What the heck the only time I Wasn’t trying to be funny she laughs just great. So I laughed along even though I didn’t know why she was laughing.
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  • "Excuse me" I said and got off the table, she looked at me with a raised eyebrow "okay" totally shocked

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On September 30th 2008 xSarahScandalx Said :
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i like it. sounds very interesting and i like how you ended with her wanting more :]
On June 24th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess i agree with patriciaxox please keep me posted i like it
On June 11th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh i agree with NicoleSmith159 and kmp
On June 8th 2008 rumcake2daend Said :
rumcake2daend keep me posted it sounds great!
On June 4th 2008 brokenvampire1 Said :
brokenvampire1 please keep me posted
On June 3rd 2008 chorusgal Said :
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On May 13th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
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On May 12th 2008 username685 Said :
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On May 12th 2008 TyffaniKnott Said :
TyffaniKnott LOL KMP
On May 12th 2008 lovin5life Said :
lovin5life i really like the story...that pick up line was jokes..haha
On May 11th 2008 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 kmp :D
On May 11th 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said :
imtheonlyme4 i love it i couldnt stop laughing at " you guys are crazy; and crazy is my middel name, and besides you all need your pimp!!!!! lol i love it!!!!!!!!!!!
On May 10th 2008 shadyishott Said :
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On May 10th 2008 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox love itt yeah but you shouldnt use me: j: and stuff like that use she said and he said and jake said. BUT I LOVE ITT and kmpp! thumbs up btw (:
On May 10th 2008 NicoleSmith159 Said :
NicoleSmith159 It's good. But, don't make it as if it were a script. Use "He said" and "She said" or other verbs after 'he' or 'she'. It will sound better and will go great with what your writing.
On May 10th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 This is pretty good! Keep me posted! Could you also keep me posted on "When I met Him?" I really like that story!
On May 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx I like ur story so far it is sort of funny bec it reminds me of myself
kmp please

On May 10th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 GREAT JOB KMP!!!
On May 10th 2008 13kc Said :
13kc KMP please!!!
On May 10th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 I really like it but the font was really hard to read.
On May 10th 2008 stephjane Said :
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On May 10th 2008 VickyLubDanii Said :
VickyLubDanii long much [;