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- Nancy woke up fighting the intensity of the lights around her, trying to make sense of what she is looking around; it looked creepy and weird. She kept blinking her eyes adapting to the light; to make the blurry scene around her clearer; she saw a guy standing right next to her; holding her hands and squeezing them. Removing her hair off her face, as the picture got more clear
- "Welcome back" he said smiling, she had difficulty talking and kept looking at the filthy walls around her; there was no window and the light was strong in the room; she looked at the old-fashioned door in the corner of the room and a chair which reminded her of her miserable intermediate school; it was made out of wood; she looked at the AV over her head; and then she saw him and had the biggest grin on her face
- "Thanks babe; what happened, where am I?" she wondered
- As he leaned and gave her a soft kiss on her lips
- "You must be in heaven" he joked
- She laughed "you still haven’t changed a bit"
- He kept staring at her as if he was seeing her for the first time; she couldn’t help it but to blush
- "Watch your mouth; you gonna have a bug in if you keep it open like that" she joked
- He laughed "in a good mood today, aren’t we?"
- "We sure are; but seriously what happened? Where am I?"
- "Remember when I told you never play with knives?" he said
- "ha ha you never told me that!" she argued
- "Well, you are prolly ….. "
- "What are you doing here you motherf***** " Adam interrupted; he looked pale and had a beard on; he looked pretty devastated and scary
- "I am talking with my girlfriend; are you blind?"
- "Shut up you moron, you think I am joking!"
- She was pretty tired to talk but somehow she managed "Adam calm down; why are you shouting, we are in a hospital for God sake!"
- "you shut up as well! You are MINE! Your either with me! Or with no one else" as he pulled out his gun facing mystery; who stood up there ever so bravely
- "so that’s your way of solving your problem, eliminate your opponent and go to jail?" he said with confident
- "yes!" shouted Adam as he closed his eyes and pulled the trigger; and the bullet decided to rest in Kevin chest as he collapsed on the ground
- Nancy looked at the whole incident not realizing what just happened; with panicked eyes she saw Kevin on the ground and Adam holding the gun as the staff held Adam and took his gun off his hand; the cop arrested him and they took Kevin off the ground into the ER room; it all happened so fast she didn’t even realize it as a nurse came back to check on her
- "Are you okay sweetie?"
- "huh?" she always been told that she was blonde at heart, but never in her life she felt lost as she was right then
- "is everything all right, do you need anything?"
- "yes! Call Kevin for me will ya!"
- "Hmmm oh sweetie…" as she sat next to her rubbing her head; "you mean the guy in the coma?"
- "No way! That’s cant be possible!!!!" she shouted at the nurse and jumped off the bed into the ER room she didn’t bother the nurses who asked her to stop or anything. And she never in her life she was that bold or that strong. She literary pushed a guy into the counter for trying to hold her back. She got in his room; he looked so peaceful she started crying pounding her hands over his chest.
- "common Hun! You know you can't leave me! What can I do without you! Common be a man! Fight back … come back to me! I need you" she held his hand as tight as she can " common I promise you I will cook a real meal when you come back from work whatever that was, I promise you I wont sleep on you when you tell me stories at 4 am, I promise you I will listen to you when you wake me up to tell me you had a nightmare! Just wake up" as she fell asleep right next to him
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| On June 7th 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On June 4th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story and i hope he comes out without any injurys and adam deserves to go to jail! |
| On May 22nd 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On May 12th 2008 lovin5life Said : | |
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I Just read all of this story and i love it...when is the next one out........kmp!!!!!!!!pleaz |
| On April 25th 2008 13kc Said : | |
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KMP!! |
| On April 10th 2008 TyffaniKnott Said : | |
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AWWWW..... POOR SEXY KEVIN....PLEASE KMP!!! |
| On April 8th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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aww. please keep me posted. ish so cutee! :]]P |
| On April 7th 2008 DaKay Said : | |
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aww kmp! |
| On April 6th 2008 ilybaby06 Said : | |
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Cute... This is a great story but I'm still confused =] KMP pretty please =]] |
| On April 6th 2008 username685 Said : | |
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intense |
| On April 5th 2008 BiAnIcole Said : | |
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aweee omg!!!! i love it!!!i got kinda confuseedd butt i loved it!!! =]=]=]=] |
| On April 4th 2008 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Awesome! That one had a lot happen in a short time, but it was still fantastic. Oh and welcome back :D Kmp |
| On April 4th 2008 tece26 Said : | |
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YEEEEEEEEEEY Yuore back woooo hooooo!!! kmp! |
| On April 4th 2008 rumcake2daend Said : | |
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keep mee posted!!!!! i cant beleive that he is n a comma!!! WAKE UP!! WAKE UP!! |
| On April 4th 2008 mirandapanda72 Said : | |
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i love this story! pleas kmp :) |
| On April 4th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Kmpppppppppp |
| On April 4th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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awesome you decided to keep the story going please keep me posted |


