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between life and death 8 ** Finally ** |
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- She dropped the phone as she ran downstairs …
- Meanwhile…
- "I told you to get off her life" Adam shouted
- "You gonna have to make me"
- "Well, if that’s the way you want it then be it!!"
- As he punched the mystery man on his face, then the he kicked him on his stomach with his knee, and tried to punch him again but the Mystery man held his hand and turn to hit the back of Adam head with his elbow which made him fall into the ground
- "KEVIN!!" shouted Nancy; as she couldn’t believe her self she swore to him to never say his name: he looked back at her, as then Adam kicked the mystery man on his knee which made him fall down and then he straddled his lap kicking and punching him; Nancy kept shouting at Adam to stop but instead he got out a knife he had, as he was pointing it into Kevin chest; Nancy ran over to Adam and was trying to take the knife away he pushed her away real hard and she fell, and then once again to stab the mystery man but he noticed something
- "There is blood in the knife" he said as he started to panic as the mystery man punched him to the floor and went to Nancy who was cut in the chest;
- "I will go get my car" cried Adam as Kevin carried Nancy to the car and they went to the hospital.
- "Oh my god" the nurse shouted as she saw Kevin carrying Nancy with blood all over his clothes
- "to the emergency room" as she pointed to the room … behind him was Adam following and crying.
- "Excuse me sir" Adam looked at the nurse "you need to wait outside"
- As the mystery man got in; since he was carrying her they allowed him to put her over the bed and then they took Kevin outside after resistance from him beginning to let him stay; but the nurse promised she will be okay and the security escorted him outside; then a cop shows up and started asking some questions
- "Are you the two young men who brought in the stab victim?"
- "Yes" said Kevin and Adam nodded
- "I will need to ask you a few questions" then she looked at how they both looked hurt; it was obvious they both been in a fight "lets start with your names?
- "Adam" Kevin hesitated but finally muttered his name
- "are the two of you related to the victim?"
- "Am her fiancé said Adam,
- Kevin cleared his throat and then said "uhm am her boyfriend"
- She looked surprised and then continued "oh well, sounds like we have a problem there. Are the two of you related to each other?
- "No" they both shouted
- "ok Adam, Kevin" she said as she looked at them "what exactly happened" looking at Kevin covered in blood
- "He stabbed her" said Adam
- She looked at Kevin. Is that true young man
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| On January 19th 2008 Jeshika23 Said : | |
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please keep me posted omg!!!! |
| On January 17th 2008 monkey892 Said : | |
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oooooh! kmp |
| On January 17th 2008 odieeido Said : | |
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omg. keep me posted!! |
| On January 16th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said : | |
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WOW LIAR BASTARD BUT GOOD |
| On January 16th 2008 beccaboo073189 Said : | |
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luv it! of course... lol. 'bout time he had a name to! i was so confused at that comment you left me but now i totally get it... keep me posted! |
| On January 16th 2008 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Great job! Love the way they both worked together to look after Nancy, but then after she was at the hospital Adam started playing the blame game. This is awesome! kmp :D |
| On January 16th 2008 username685 Said : | |
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WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!kmp plz |
| On January 16th 2008 eternallpain Said : | |
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why arent u keepin me posted!!!!!!!!!!!!! am mad!!! but i loveeeee it ... nd boy its gettin complicatedd!!! |
| On January 16th 2008 DaKay Said : | |
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:O ADAM STABBED HER NOT KEVIN!! |
| On January 16th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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aww! damn liar! i wanna just punch him in his damn face! keep me posted.. |
| On January 16th 2008 BiAnIcole Said : | |
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ewwww omgggg he better standd up and tell the damn truth!!!!!! keep me posted!! |
| On January 16th 2008 rumcake2daend Said : | |
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i have always hated adam but it adds to the story so its good!!!! |
| On January 16th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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WHAT??? NO! NANCY WILL TELL THE TRUTH! Adam needs to die! Please keep me posted. |
| On January 16th 2008 XxLostSoul93xX Said : | |
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OMG Ahh... nice job! |
| On January 16th 2008 tece26 Said : | |
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:o :o :o what?! WHAT?! Adam is EVIL! And uhm... what happened to the nurse part? lol... CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!! GREAT JOB AS ALWAYS LOVE IT |
| On January 16th 2008 melibeans10 Said : | |
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when it was ADAM that stabbed her.. i hate him even more now.. |


