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between life and death 8 ** Finally **
Tragedy
 Created on 1-6-08
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- make sure to read Tece side of the story and find out how Jenny finds out about it! stay tone ....
- She is such a great kid; he smiled remembering the time; they spent together; wow, I never thought I would meet someone so special so soon! He looked back at little Sandra to check on her; then a sudden loud siren he looked as a fast driver drove over the red light; it was so sudden so quick; and before he knew it he was laying on the street ground; covered with blood; he looked for Sandra as he realized what happened; he was in terrible pain but he felt nothing as he heard him say "the little girl is dead its too late" he cried "NO" as he saw Sandra coming through the crowd giving him a hand "come with me" she said with a smile he haven't seen in forever; he smiled as tears started falling out of his eyes.
- "such a tragedy" a woman said;
- Other shouted "oh my god I feel bad for their mom"
- "I think he is gone" a guy finally shouted
- Silence ruled the placed as the ambulance took them off and then everything went back to normal at that street while they took the cars
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On February 4th 2008 RoKkErBiTcH Said : | |
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omg i loved it..it was sad though it almost made me cry!! great job though!! |
| On January 10th 2008 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Awesome! I liked the way it was very short and almost sort of, unemotional. It makes it more realistic - you can't really be emotional when you're dead :P Lol, Fantastic story!!!!! |
| On January 6th 2008 melibeans10 Said : | |
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nice.. |
| On January 6th 2008 username685 Said : | |
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WHY SO SHORT AHHHHHH
great story tho
thanks for keeping me posted |
| On January 6th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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aw. that was so short and so sad. thanks for keeping me posted! |
| On January 6th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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Good story, but very sad! Great job! |
| On January 6th 2008 kg108551 Said : | |
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Nice, but sad! :'( *thumbs up* |
| On January 6th 2008 tece26 Said : | |
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So Sad! He is back with his Sandra though... Great job hun! You finished a story! YEY YOU! |
