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between life and death 2

Tragedy Created on 12-7-07 Views(480) Story Rating G

  • this story goes alone with tece story "mothers love" you need to check it out to get the whole picture! thanks

 

  • "You seem very sad for someone who just took some test, I hope you don’t mind me asking, but are the tests ok?"
  • "Well, am dieing"
  • She looked shock "OMG! What you got?"
  • "Who said you have to be sick to be dieing, I didn’t get the test yet though but they ain't for me anyway"
  • As he let out a mocking laugh
  • Then awkward silence ruled the room as a 1 year old girl runs to the guy as he gets a big grin on his face and open his arm where she lands
  • "OMG! That is such a cute kid!"
  • "yip, I made her" he ended the sentence with a sad weak voice
  • **** flash back ****
  • "You know when we have this child I want him to have your eyes"
  • Laughing *
  • "no way! First I want a girl, and I want her to have your seductive eyes that blew my head away!"
  • "hmmm looking at him, okay if she is a girl she can have my eyes but I want her to have your lips!!! Cuz they are so freaking cute" as she kiss him
  • He grins "I want her to have your beautiful hair" 
  • "Hun, *looking at him* that’s so cheesy * both laughing* but some how am loving it" and she kisses him again
  •      **** End of the flash back***
  • "You guys must be a very cute family!"
  • He gets a big sigh off "yeh, we could've been"
  • "What do you mean?"
  • "Her mom is dead"
  • "OMG! That’s horrible, am so so so sorry!"
  • "It's okay"
  • She hesitated before she finally asked
  • "oh I hope am not interfering or anything, but how did she die?"
  • Again he let out a big sigh looking away so that she wont see the tears falling outta his eyes, drinking some of his coffee and then asked his daughter to go hit the wall and come back laughing as she ran toward the wall then he looked at her
  • "She died giving birth to my daughter"
  • "oh am so so sorry!!!!"
  • The girl came back running and laughing talking gibberish he seemed to understand what she said and laughed with her, then he looked at the girl and asked
  • "What's your name?"
  • She seemed to have spaced out a little and then muttered
  • "Uh Jennifer but you can call me Jenny u?"
  • "Joe, what are you in here for?"

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On February 27th 2008 dorkwitfork Said :
dorkwitfork huh? im confuzzled
On December 31st 2007 Sk8ncutie001 Said :
Sk8ncutie001 Whats with ams??? Isnt it im!
On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 I love the way the flashbacks are incorporated into the story. Great job.
On December 12th 2007 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz awe. thats sad. please keep me posted
On December 9th 2007 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae great job keep me posted!!!
On December 8th 2007 alienz13 Said :
alienz13 keep me posted
On December 8th 2007 oxXxlovelyxXxo Said :
oxXxlovelyxXxo please keep me posted.
On December 8th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 its awesome...keep me posted plz hun...thanx xoxo ~*~Dava~*~ xoxo
On December 8th 2007 beccaboo073189 Said :
beccaboo073189 i'm lovin' it!!!! great job, keep me posted, now i gotta head to tece's... and thanx for the comments~
On December 7th 2007 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter is there any more?? If there is lemme know!!
On December 7th 2007 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX Love it please keep me posted.
On December 7th 2007 eternallpain Said :
eternallpain I LOVE Em!!!
On December 7th 2007 JessicAngel Said :
JessicAngel still the omg (s) are hear, and for a story that doesn't work well. but it's very interesting, a little confusing in some ways though...but i like it, so you said this goes with mother's love, oh boy lots of stories to read :P
On December 7th 2007 melibeans10 Said :
melibeans10 i like it but it a little confusing and u keep putting am instead of i am and that gets confusing as well.. but other wise i like it
On December 7th 2007 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter pretty good; a little confusing because of the "" marks but great job :)
On December 7th 2007 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 This is great so far! It's getting interesting! Keep it up! Keep me posted!
On December 7th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 GREAT JOB! I LOVE IT!