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between life and death
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- *flash back*
- "OMG!!!!! Am Gonna die!!! "
- Sandra looked at him with tears filling her eyes as some escapes, and fear as she held his hand tighter!
- "Joe!!! I don’t want to die!!! Am too young!"
- "Baby, your not going to die! Am not going to let that happen ok!! People do that all the time!!!! Push baby push!!!"
- As he tried to hide his tears off his eyes,
- "hun! Promise me I wont die!!"
- He held her closer hun, I promise, you gonna have a beautiful baby and laugh at this tomorrow, just stay strong now
- "I CANT!!!!! Screaming"
- As the machine started making noises he looked at the doc and he instantly knew that’s not normal! He kept asking the doctor what was going on as the doc called for other doctors; she looked at him with panic filled in her eyes, he was freaking out himself.
- ":what's going on?" she cried, he didn’t know what to see holding her hand closer as the nurse asked him to get off the room. Sandra held him tighter shouting "no don’t leave me! Joe ! Please… I want him am scared" he refused as well. So two nurses pushed him out of the room
- ***end of the flash back***
- He sat in a bench at a hospital, putting his face between his knees as he started crying from that sour memory! A girl approached him with cup of coffee and gave it to him, he looked at her and nodded as he wiped off his tears, as the others decided to rest in his jean,
- Is everything all right?
- Yeah, he nodded, even if it wasn’t life surely goes on right?
- Yeh! That cruel life, never gives anyone a chance to grief.
- He kept his silence …
- "Do you have anyone in here?"
- "No, I was just here to get some tests"
- "You seem very sad for someone who just took some test, I hope you don’t mind me asking, but are the tests ok?"
- "Well, am dieing"
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| On August 26th 2008 Brooklyn2sista Said : | |
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WOW that was good |
| On February 4th 2008 RoKkErBiTcH Said : | |
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its good!...i jus started reading these series so i gotta go read the rest!! |
| On January 6th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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how sad |
| On December 21st 2007 Smarties4 Said : | |
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Great job, I love it (and am reading tece's part as well :D) |
| On December 9th 2007 analyssarenae Said : | |
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this is really good! and yours and tece26's part fit perfectly! i love it! keep me posted! |
| On December 7th 2007 JessicAngel Said : | |
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it was confusing to know what was going on in the flash back, but it keeps me what to read more...you might want to change omg to actually spell it out though :) |
| On December 6th 2007 brosbestfrien1 Said : | |
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I love it |
| On December 6th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said : | |
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i love it its awesome...keep me posted plz hun...thanx ~*~Dava~*~ |
| On December 5th 2007 beccaboo073189 Said : | |
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keep me posted, this is great!!!! ttyl |
| On December 4th 2007 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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it's pretty good; slow down a bit but it's cool PLZ keep me posted! |
| On December 4th 2007 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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Good so far keep me posted please. |
| On December 4th 2007 oxXxlovelyxXxo Said : | |
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keep me posted plz!!!! |
| On December 4th 2007 TLee14 Said : | |
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it's pretty good. post more and keep me posted!! |
| On December 4th 2007 peteXloverX9 Said : | |
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this is very good. Keep me posted on the new stuff1 |
| On December 4th 2007 Tiffiscool16 Said : | |
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really strong and amazing beginnng to a story. Excellent job! |
| On December 4th 2007 tece26 Said : | |
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this is a great story. I love it. AWESOME JOB!! |
| On December 4th 2007 unknownwolfie Said : | |
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comment pwz .. lol dont just rate, I want to know what you think :P |
| On December 4th 2007 kg108551 Said : | |
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cool keep me posted...?? |
| On December 4th 2007 unknownwolfie Said : | |
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if you want to really enjoy this story and make it three dimential you MUST read tece's part of the story, and you will be amazed! |
| On December 4th 2007 tece26 Said : | |
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:D |


