Email:
Password:

Created By

Rate this Story

+66

Embed


My Stories
+ 21
Just Friends 2
+ 24
When I met him *Ending*
+ 24
when I met him 26
+ 20
when I met him 25
+ 24
When I met him 24
+ 22
When I met him 23
+ 41
Just Friends -1-
+ 34
When I met him 22
+ 40
When I met him 21
+ 39
When I met him 20
+ 47
When I met him 19
+ 40
When I met him 18
+ 38
When I met him (so far) summery
+ 35
between life and death 8 ** Finally **
+ 35
Blind man diary 2
+ 36
between life and death 7
+ 37
between life and death 6
+ 37
between life and death 5
+ 40
between life and death 4
+ 18
Prolouge

When I met him 17

Romance Created on 11-28-07 Views(511) Story Rating G

  • "Are you sure that’s what you want to do? You trust him that much?"
  •  
  • "YES! I do! … I love him, I never been so in love my entire life! Never felt as wonderful as I do now!"
  •  
  • "cool then!! That’s what I needed to hear plus I don’t like that Adam either"
  •  
  • Both of them laughing
  •  
  • "Okay we need rescue; I will call Amy and Janet"
  •  
  •                            **********
  • Dear Nancy,
  •  
  • I have no idea how to write this without sounding a total bastard but know that I love you with all my heart and would never do anything to hurt you on purpose; ever since I've known you, I started to know life better am no longer mad at the world or at anyone, I wish I didn’t lie to you, plenty of stuff that I regret now because it might make u not take me back, but I LOVE YOU more than I ever loved anyone before and I want to tell you everything about me; how my stepmother took advantage of me when I was a kid and I never said anything to a soul before; I grew up fearing women which lead me into knowing women which made it easy for me to have any woman I want. Women are like the capitals of a country wonderful and great, but you can't spend your life in it; plus there is always someone I never tried. So I spent my time going from a relation to the other without thinking that they had feelings because I never had for any of them. I was just trying to overcome the abuse I went through before and I know that’s not an excuse for my behavior and am not trying to explain my self am just telling you what I never told a soul before, then somehow this whole trying women issue became a job, guys would pay me money to break their girls heart which I always did so I thought it was good to get paid and have fun at the same time; but you were different, the moment I saw you at the bar; I knew that you gonna make…
  •  
  • Then he stopped writing and cut the paper into pieces and threw it away; as he put both of his hands over his head and his eyes started to tear up, and went back to bed gazing into the ceiling
  •  
  •                            ********************
  • Janet:  Oh My God!! That’s one hella of a story! And you never told me!!!! Ur unbelievable!!...
  •  
  • Amy: I know something was different about you! Am so good!...
  •  
  • Nancy blushing
  •  
  • Cassie: girls girls calm down! Give the girl a minute to breath!
  •  
  • Amy:  ok ok  breathed yet??? Details!
  •  
  • Janet: Amy try to be considerate you know how shy nancy is
  •  
  • Amy: shut up! Nobody asked you nothing...
  •  
  • Janet: you shut up plus Nancy is my friend and am allowed to …
  •  
  • Cassie: now you two just stop it! We are not here to fight! Lets think about the perfect way to break up with Adam
  •  
  • Janet: piece of cake, just tell him yo piece of shit I don’t love you anymore and we are over! Now go sob somewhere else … hahaha
  •  
  • Amy: hahaha no no no that’s harsh, ask him to sob in your bathroom hahaha
  •  
  • Cassie: hahaha
  •  
  • Nancy laughing also: you know I would never do something like that, plus he is a nice guy he deserver an appropriate break up
  •  
  • Amy: is there one? A break up is a break up hun you want to be polite, marry him hahaha
  •  
  • Janet: hmmm Nancy is right, now Amy if you have a good suggestion say it and if you don’t then shut your mouth…
  •  
  • Cassie: how about you write him a letter and send it to him!
  •  
  • Amy:  whats wrong with you Janet! Trying to pick a fight!  Your cocky nose missed my fist?
  •  
  • Janet: whatever bring it on! As if
  •  
  • Nancy: STOP IT BOTH  OF YOU! Are you like 6!
  •  
  • Everyone is looking at Nancy with total amazement she never lost her temper before; so it was quiet for a while
  •  
  • Cassie: whoa! I think you scared them
  •  
  • Amy: yip, now I have to check in the bathroom hahahaha
  •  
  • Janet: hahahaha yah me to! She really needs our help I say; or maybe anger mangment hahaha
  •  
  • Cassie: ok what did you think of the letter idea?
  •  
  • Nancy: Nop, plus he is not like that easy he will come back I want to end him for long!
  •  
  • Amy: yeah I think he is a stalker, ever since we were in high school!
  •  
  • Cassie: why you two broke up anyway?
  •  
  • Amy: he started harassing anyone around her; or any guy who talks or even look at her! It was kind of funny because by senior year no one will get even close to her!
  •  
  • Janet: I thought Cassie was asking Nancy but whatever, is that true Nancy?
  •  
  • Amy: are you saying am laying!
  •  
  • Janet: I didn’t say anything, you realized it on your own
  •  
  • Cassie: okay you two stop, now think how can we break them up
  •  
  • Janet: how about you go find a picture with him and his ex or something and like act like he been cheating on you; throw him out and never talk to him again!
  •  
  • Nancy: I don’t think he had an ex
  •  
  • Cassie: hahaha man he is such a loser
  •  
  • Janet: don’t be fooled, he might look all innocent but am sure he has plenty of shit hidden
  •  
  • Amy:  omg! Perfect job for you Janet; I know how much you like shit
  •  
  • Cassie: well how about you check his email; everyone got secrets there; we might find something
  • Nancy: I don’t think so; he gives me all his passwords
  • Amy: great idea…
  •  
  • Janet: yeh as if that possible
  •  
  • Amy: how about one of us send him love letters and you act like you found it and face him with it through it at him and dump him! And never give him a chance to explain himself
  •  
  • Nancy: hmmmmm
  •  
  • Janet: nop even better, not a letter; we send him a girl and you walk into them shout scream hit him with something get out
  •  
  • Cassie: yeah that sounds like a good idea

Comments

Please Login to post comments
On January 14th 2008 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 I've decided that it's really good that you write such a long story without losing people's interest and getting boring. It's amazing. Please keep me posted when you bring out the next part. GREAT writing!!!! :)
On January 8th 2008 haylesrox Said :
haylesrox lmfao, itz good, keep me posted
On November 30th 2007 zomgitzwendyxD Said :
zomgitzwendyxD great work ! :] keep me posted~
On November 29th 2007 blondechickx3 Said :
blondechickx3 i like it. keep me posted =]
On November 29th 2007 odieeido Said :
odieeido keep me posted :)
On November 29th 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said :
qosdfyjvwefayv hahha
On November 29th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 awesomeness...keep me posted plzz hun...thanx ~Dava~
On November 28th 2007 beccaboo073189 Said :
beccaboo073189 it's good, i wish mr. unknown would spill to her and not chicken out! lol
On November 28th 2007 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX That's great keep me posted.
On November 28th 2007 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz lmao haha this is funny.. please keep me postedd!
On November 28th 2007 rumcake2daend Said :
rumcake2daend hire a hit man? nah too much of a hassle hmmm... how do u break up with a crazy man? hmmm.....
On November 28th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 hmmmm If she knew what Adam hired mr unknown for she wouldnt have to fake anything. lol the girls are funny. poor unknown... Great job. I want the rest now!