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Romance
 Created on 10-23-07
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- She felt his absence in every second of her life. He didn’t just enter her life, he invaded it. Wherever she looked she found a glimpsed of him. She cried each and every night wondering why is it happening to her; why did he decide to enter my life if he is going to leave. She thought that time would heal the misery she kept inside. Everyone noticed she wasn’t her self. But how could she act like nothing had happened when she is torned up to little pieces. She needed him. The problem was that he never gave her a reason to hate him; she hates him for leaving her but want him back still. She wanted to have closure, at least a reason. Is she that insignificant to him? Did he want to play her around? Maybe Adam gave him money to do this so that I could get back to him. Well, if that was Adam's plan its defiantly working! As she got back with him to revenge from the mystry guy. Adam wasn’t such a bad guy after all at least he was commitment enough even though I don’t like him but still I respect him as a human. She never heard of him for 3 long weeks but once as she was getting off work he approached her
- "hey"
- joy rushed into her heart as she recognized the voice, she couldn’t wait till she sees him but still she was mad and engage. She looked at him with how dare you come back to me look, after all you did! You think am that easy, you can come back whenever you want! … her eyes said it all, the pain, sleepless nights.
- "I know you hate me now and I don’t blame you, but you deserve better than this better than me"
- She ignored him and walked away as tears started filling her eyes
- "you know what I did is the hardest thing for any man to ever do, and I never regret anything as I regret doing this, and am not here to give you reasons for you to forgive me but I need to do this for your and my own sake so when we look back at this neither of us would have regrets
- She kept walking as he kept following her with tears filling her eyes then she finally stopped as she crashed down with tears
- "What do you want from me? Isn’t that enough! You want more of this! You want to torture me! What do you want from me! Damn you! You bastard!"
- As she leaned on the wall crying
- "Listen, there is something you need to know and it's really hard for me to tell you! I would rather die am telling you I wish am dead! I wish I never was created! Don’t you think am not suffering as much as you are. But I made a mistake; I should've told you this from the beginning, you see I tried leaving you but I can't! I tried leaving you so that you wont have to go through the sorrow am at, You deserve more than this even if you cant take it; I made the choice for us, but now am gonna tell you everything and leave it to you to decide! Either let me go or keep me. It's not even fair to make u decide on this, but it’s a must"
- "What is it?"
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On January 14th 2008 Smarties4 Said : | |
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To the next part! Quick, Quick!!!...woot! |
| On November 4th 2007 beccaboo073189 Said : | |
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this is torture!!! what happens!?!?!?!?!? i just read the whole story and i need more!!! lol.. please keep me posted?? |
| On October 25th 2007 sharpie19 Said : | |
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ughhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so not fair! wtf!? lol |
| On October 24th 2007 Oddessy65 Said : | |
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I HATE YOU!! WHAT IS IT!?!?! OMG WHAT?!??!! AAAGH!! |
| On October 24th 2007 starryboo Said : | |
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LOVE IT!!! |
| On October 24th 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said : | |
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woooow luhv it plzzz keep meh posted thnx =D |
| On October 24th 2007 xlollipopgurlx Said : | |
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coolzzzz post me plzz |
| On October 24th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said : | |
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omfg!! what is it??? u have to hurry && write...keep me posted... |
| On October 23rd 2007 tece26 Said : | |
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This is a GREAT story!! I cant believe you left it there after we waited sooooo long for you to post a new part! GRRRRR... You better hurry and write more. I need to know damn it!!
PS.. I think you might have made october1015 mad. Keep us all posted |
| On October 23rd 2007 zomgitzwendyxD Said : | |
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ooh i love it. i wonder what it isss. keep me posted :) |
| On October 23rd 2007 Baillie010 Said : | |
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omg keep me posted! i loves it! AHHHHH! |
| On October 23rd 2007 sherryiscool14 Said : | |
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LOVE IT |
| On October 23rd 2007 october1015 Said : | |
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Omg you motherfucker. I hate you wolfie. You stupid fuck. You didn't keep me posted. You are so damn lucky I clicked on the story section. Grrr. KEEP ME FUCKING POSTED. |
| On October 23rd 2007 Aegle Said : | |
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah cliffhanger. keep me posted please |
| On October 23rd 2007 sangta Said : | |
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omg! what happen? please write more! |
| On October 23rd 2007 metal4lifebaby Said : | |
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GOSH.
i can't take the suspense!!!
keep me posted plz.
great writing. |
| On October 23rd 2007 Nyyia Said : | |
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omg i loved it keep me posted and im sidin with her. what is it. keep me posted. |
| On October 23rd 2007 WaitingAlone Said : | |
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AHHHHHHHH YOU CANT STOP IT THERE!!!! PLZ WRITE MORE KEEP ME POSTEDD!!!!! |
| On October 23rd 2007 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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Please keep me posted PLEASE!!! It's good. |
| On October 23rd 2007 guardgirl22 Said : | |
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omg! keep me posted!!! i love this story!!!
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