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- She sat down holding the note as tears started invading her face she wanted to stop but she had no control. For a second there she didn’t think. Maybe it's my imagination she thought. But her tears knew what happened. She sat there quietly looking at everything around "that’s cant happen, not to me! I didn’t do anything WHY!!!" deep inside her she knew there was something wrong as soon as she saw the TV off. She always fought him cuz he always keep it on "it keep the thieves away" he always claim. She felt a burden on her chest all the sudden she couldn’t breath, her head was spinning as she laid down on the couch trying to stop her tears from falling "maybe am dreaming" she thought. As she closed her eyes and woke up later on that night. She never misses work, even when she is sick she would call. This time she didn’t go to work or even call. The apartment was unbelievably quiet, she could even her heart beat going on faster as she saw that note again and this time she burst into tears the only thought going through her head into her grieving is WHY? What did I do? Why didn’t he face me? Who the hell he thinks he is! With a note!!! Don’t I deserve at least an appropriate break up! She didn’t even want to get up or do anything she never felt that down in her life! She never trusted anyone and she was living happily! Why did she let her self fall for him! As the phone rang again, at first she didn’t want to pick it up. She wanted to stay in the middle of her sadness. Then she thought it might be him so she picked the phone up anyway, she might after all find answers! Or tell whoever it is about it
- "hello"
- "hey!, what's wrong honey?"
- "nothing, what do you want?
- "baby, you don’t sound all right, tell me what's wrong?"
- "Adam, please leave me alone!" as she burst in tears again
- "no, not until you tell me what's going on!"
- "don’t make me hang the phone on u adam its not the right time for me!"
- "If you hang up on me, am coming to you! Tell me what's wrong, am concern!"
- "he left me!" as she burst into tears again sopping with tears
- Adam sat there in silent as he heard her cry her heart out
- "Maybe I really suck that much, I don’t deserve nothing! No one will ever love me
- "I …. Uh I love you!" he muttered
- She kept crying, sopping her heart out
- "am coming over ok?" he said
- "no! I wanna go to bed"
- "I will just stay around I wont bother you, you can sleep"
- "No please Adam, leave me alone I need to be alone"
- "Ok fine! Can you at least stay on the phone?"
- "I have nothing to say"
- "Still I just want to be next to you"
- "fine, I will leave it up"
- "you know what sucks!'
- "What?"
- "I don’t know why that is happening!!! Why he left me! Did u have a hand in it? Tell me honestly!
- "No I didn’t! I don’t even know the guy!"
- "Swear"
- "I can't believe you do not believe me! I swear I had nothing to do with it, as a matter of fact if I could go and find him, I would bring him to you! So that you wont waste another tear of yours! You don’t know how much they are precious"
- "I guess you enjoy collecting them, don’t you?"
- "No I don’t but if that’s the only way to be with you, so be it"
- "Why are you being nice to me? I thought you hated me!"
- "I love you!!! Can't you see! Everyday without you is hell!"
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| On April 20th 2008 13kc Said : | |
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why the heak would he leave her! |
| On January 14th 2008 Smarties4 Said : | |
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I think I'm running out of nice things to say - I've used up all of the amazingly, fantastic, awesome words I can think of that would describe how much I like this story :D |
| On October 19th 2007 libbybig07 Said : | |
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whats going on? lol. why did da mystery guy leave her n whats gunna happen with her and adam? |
| On October 16th 2007 blondechickx3 Said : | |
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agh keep me posted please. |
| On October 12th 2007 blonde098 Said : | |
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Wtf. why did the mystery guy leave? i want to know. keep me reposted please. thank you. |
| On October 11th 2007 Baillie010 Said : | |
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omg! why did he break up with her? I DEMAND TO KNOW!! ahh keep me posted! |
| On October 10th 2007 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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Please keep me psoted. Why did the guy breka up with her?? |
| On October 10th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said : | |
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y did he leave her...poor adam...i love it plzz keep me posted |
| On October 10th 2007 xlollipopgurlx Said : | |
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wowza! post moi plz |
| On October 9th 2007 012ihatekarely Said : | |
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men its freakin cool |
| On October 9th 2007 CrazyGirlz25 Said : | |
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whoa! so good... my mind is racing with ideas as to what is coming next! Keep me posted if posible |
| On October 9th 2007 Nyyia Said : | |
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i liked it keep me posted |
| On October 9th 2007 Oddessy65 Said : | |
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I WANT THE MYSTERY GUY BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!!! WAAAAAAH!!! |
| On October 9th 2007 WaitingAlone Said : | |
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OMFG!!! WHY DID HE LEAVE HER?? Please keep me posted i need to know what happens. And what does adam have to do with all this? |
| On October 9th 2007 Aegle Said : | |
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its gasping amazing...its orgasmic!!!!!! yes thats the word. Please if you do write more please keep me posted. ITs such a cliff hanger, I want to know what happened between her and the mysterious guy and if Adam is going to get her ekkkk |
| On October 9th 2007 monkey892 Said : | |
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awwicle i like it keep me poste
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| On October 9th 2007 sherryiscool14 Said : | |
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Omg u like soo totally have to keep me posted i like it |
| On October 9th 2007 zomgitzwendyxD Said : | |
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write more please i wanna see what happens keep up the good work && keep me posted tys (= |
| On October 9th 2007 guardgirl22 Said : | |
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wow!!! love it |
| On October 9th 2007 BiAnIcole Said : | |
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i ma so confused!!!!what the hell!! i know that prick adam had somthing to do with it!!!! pleasee keep me posted =]=]=]=] gr88 story i love it. |
| On October 9th 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said : | |
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wow luhv it.... i want more like now lol =D |
| On October 9th 2007 tece26 Said : | |
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wow. You never fail to leave us wanting more! Now I feel bad for Adam, But the mystery guy was so fun... Why did he leave and whats next? You need to hurry with the next part. I want to know now |
| On October 9th 2007 eternallpain Said : | |
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omg! am confused!!! wow, i love it nd poor adam lol i think some how we all want the person who dont want us nd never fall for the one who does, its lik carvin for the bad boy! |
| On October 9th 2007 unknownwolfie Said : | |
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hey ... so this site delete lik old comments so its hard to keep intouch with u all .. so if u want me to keep u posted just send me a msg, so tht i wont lose contact! thnx all nd i hope u all lik it ,, let me know what u think so far! :) |


