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when I met him p10

Romance Created on 9-11-07 Views(767) Story Rating G

  • He: okay so I was wondering if I could like get inside
  • She looked at him with total shock on her face
  • He smiled: well I thought I would wait inside while you get me my shoes remember
  • She: oh yah right, wait here I will run upstairs and get em
  • He: how rude is that! Make me wait in the rain, in the cold, freezing weather; you know I might get sick or something
  • She looked at him: fine you can wait in the living room.
  • He let a big smile appears on his face: okay let's go.
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  • She got in the house, turned on the lights led him to the living room as he kept staring at everything in her house: how about you offer me some dry clothes for change, a towel would be fine
  • She looked at him in total shock and murmured something: you wait here ok; I will go get you your chose and come back
  • She went upstairs freaking out there is this stranger in my house, wet and all: how did I let that happen! She kept thinking what if he raped me now, wait maybe he already thinks he is gonna get me, yeah the way he smiled didn’t show no good intention, I don’t even know his name! Nobody knows his name; my God he could kill me in my house and nobody would know. As she started freaking out not knowing what to do then she slapped her self nd said snap out of it girl! Focus! Its not like your 6, you can defend ur self. Plus if he wanted to rape you or kill you he would've done it already. Plus he is too cute to be a killer. She grabbed his shoes and went downstairs but to her shock she didn’t find him. She was hearing voices coming from the kitchen then she started seeing someone moving; OMG he is going to kill me she ran away nd hid in the closet; breathing heavily as the strange voice appears again:
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  • "NANCY! You there! …."
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  • "Common finish already! Nancy! You ok!"
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  •  She got her self together and said
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  • "yeah am fine I will get in here right away"
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  • She got off the closet grabbed a towel and the shoes, then, went downstairs again. He got outta the kitchen shirtless with tea in his hand and he gave her a cup: here you go, hope you don’t mind I used your kitchen and your dryer. She looked away and gave him the towel; she doesn’t know why she does all of that! He put the towel over him started rubbing it with his hair:
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  • "Wow you really take along time"
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  •  As they sat on the couch she sat unbelievably away. She kept staring at his chest whenever he looked away and then he looks at her and start smirking knowing what she was doing. She would start blushing and then look away. Few minutes larer the dryer sound went of,
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  •   "Oh I think my shirt is ready"
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  • He got up and got his shirt and she was looking at him in total amazement, it looked as if it was his house rather than hers. He looked at her with a smirk as she watched him getting his shirt on. Then he acted like he was going to take off his pant: oh this pant is awfully wet! Then she screamed: no! Change at your house
  • He looked at her and laughed: okay missy I guess I will go now, I will call you okay
  • She blushing: okay and let out a giggle he looked at her and laughed
  • He got out, closed the door. And let out a deep breath still shocked of everything that’s happening in her life; how weird all of that as she laid her back on the door; the phone rang. She ran toward the phone …  

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On January 12th 2008 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 this story is awesome!! anyway, I'm gonna take a break and read the rest some other time ok? :P
On October 3rd 2007 cute0teacher Said :
cute0teacher lol ... i would rather he got off his pants lol
On September 16th 2007 sashamk Said :
sashamk i think when he wrote on the peice of paper, he copied her number & didnt even put his own on it! ya know, i could be wrong, but iss juss my opinian based on this guys behavior!! anywayz, great so far, thanx for keepin me posted!!
On September 15th 2007 xlollipopgurlx Said :
xlollipopgurlx please keep me posted!!!!
On September 14th 2007 starryboo Said :
starryboo really good!
On September 14th 2007 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole incredibly cute i love it!! please keep me postedd=]=]=]=]
On September 12th 2007 Baillie010 Said :
Baillie010 haha i love this!
On September 12th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 i love it its funny...keep me posted plz
On September 11th 2007 brosbestfrien1 Said :
brosbestfrien1 alsome
On September 11th 2007 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox keep me posted missy!
On September 11th 2007 Aegle Said :
Aegle haha it can't be him he doesn't have her number i wanna no keep me posted please
On September 11th 2007 blondechickx3 Said :
blondechickx3 its still great.
On September 11th 2007 blondechickx3 Said :
blondechickx3 its still great.
On September 11th 2007 blondechickx3 Said :
blondechickx3 its still great.
On September 11th 2007 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX keep me posted it's good.
On September 11th 2007 october1015 Said :
october1015 Lol its funny I love it!
On September 11th 2007 nickelxxpickle Said :
my picture
ummm..it really didnt make sense but ok...
On September 11th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 This is a funny part, especially her hiding in the closet and trying to see more of his chest when he wasnt looking. lol... Your a great storyteller, keep it up!
On September 11th 2007 heathsgurl94 Said :
heathsgurl94 haha,i love it.
On September 11th 2007 eternallpain Said :
eternallpain this part is so funny, I love it ... keep me posted!