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When I met him 9

Romance Created on 8-30-07 Views(731) Story Rating G

  • She never imagined she would something like that before but she held him from his shirt and pulled him over and
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  • She pulled him over and wrote her number on his chest, he was shocked but at the same time looking at her and smiling
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  • He: OMG its raining outside
  • She: yeah, wow it rained outta nowhere
  • He: common lets get out  
  • She: no way, am not getting out in the rain like that; that’s ridiculous
  • He: com'on how can you tell seriously com'on lets go out dance in the rain or something
  • She: NO!
  • He pullin her hand: your telling me there is no little girl in you shouting to go out
  • She: no, well maybe
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  • As he pulled her over and they got out … he went to the middle of the street nd opened his hands and started going in cricules screaming "FREEDOM" as in braveheart, she kept trying to get away from the rain but failed because it was everywhere she kept laughing at him and screaming at him
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  • She: get back here, before some car hits you or something
  • He: do you care?
  • She: care about what?
  • He: if I got hit by a car or something
  • She: well yeh of course
  • He: why?
  • She: why what?
  • He: why do you care?
  • She: because….. I just do
  • He: well I won't move tell you tell me why
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  • As the cars start coming over honking at him madly
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  • She: com'on get back this is no fun
  • He: Why do you care?
  • She: because you are my friend
  • He laughing: well that is good enough
  • He got back to her, held her hand and asked her to follow him " I wanna show u something beautiful" she followed as usual, nd they both were socked with the rain and all; he walked with her in allies again until they reached this really old house, it didn’t have a door or anything. It was a wreck. Common over don’t be shy he said laughing as he walked over the broken woods
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  • She: no way, am not gonna walk through that I would prolly get hurt or see a mouse or something……..  I just want to get back home   
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  • He: you still don’t trust com'on seriously this is so much fun
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  • She: what is? Breaking and entering … you want me to end up a criminal
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  • He laughing: no, just get in and you tell me if its worth it
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  • She: No
  • He: fine, let me walk you back home
  • She: okay
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  • As they walking back home, soaked and all; she was pretty cold but was afraid to say something not knowing what he might do, he felt she was cold nd so was he, he walked besides her:
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  • you know what I heard?
  • What?
  • They say the best way to get warm is to cuddle naked
  • She was shocked how could he even say something like that he is so bold! But she didn’t say reply and acted like she didn’t hear anything
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  • As they reached her house
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  • "well that’s me, I will guess I will hear from u?"
  • Oh shit! Let me check, I think what u wrote is gone in the rain, some safe place that is!"
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  • She laughed hard "my god I cant believe this!"
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  • He "wanna try writing it on my butt this time?"
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  • My God he is so bold!!!  Why is he saying all these stuff but instead she smiled nd lik hit him softly on his shoulder: no I don’t think so, nd held his hand and wrote he number in the palm of his hand.
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  • She: well here you go
  • He: so who is in your house right now?
  • She: no one prolly just me, why ?
  • He with a grin: I wanna tell you something and please don’t hit me
  • She: what?
  • He: okay so I was wondering if I could lik get inside …   

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On January 12th 2008 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 Loving it! Your structure and spelling is getting better and better aswell... great job!!
On October 2nd 2007 cute0teacher Said :
cute0teacher WOW ... it's so cool ... dancing under the rain ??? DO i know u from somewhere ? let me read the next part
On September 8th 2007 hardcorejay Said :
hardcorejay love it lol he probably just wants to get in from the rain
On September 6th 2007 Oddessy65 Said :
Oddessy65 GOD he is so ARROGANT!! I love him!! lol send me a message (not a comment please...) when the next chapter is out!! *~xODDx~*
On September 3rd 2007 blondechickx3 Said :
blondechickx3 i love it.
On September 3rd 2007 brosbestfrien1 Said :
brosbestfrien1 I love it
On September 2nd 2007 xlollipopgurlx Said :
xlollipopgurlx great!!! i am wondering wats in the house...but plz keep me posted!!
On August 31st 2007 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 i love it!!! bold guys r hott...lmao...i wanna know wat was written in the alley && the house...so hurry && write some more
On August 31st 2007 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox lol. keep me posted
On August 31st 2007 LySsAjAnElL Said :
LySsAjAnElL Just kinda curious, how old are you? amazing story!
On August 31st 2007 october1015 Said :
october1015 Lmao omg wow! He is soo childish hehe this is great!
On August 31st 2007 sashamk Said :
sashamk keep me posted pleass?!
On August 31st 2007 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX i'm lovin it keep me posted please
On August 30th 2007 heathsgurl94 Said :
heathsgurl94 omg. i loves it.hes so bold,its hillarious.
the last line i noticed he was pointing to one thing.
things that most 13 year olds shouldn't know about.
but oh well.
On August 30th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 I love that he is so bold! But now I want to know what was so beautiful in the old house and what was written in the alley. You need to hurry with more!!
On August 30th 2007 eternallpain Said :
eternallpain I love it
On August 30th 2007 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole hahahah omg i love it!!!! please keep me posted on this =]=]=]=]
On August 30th 2007 jtnkrbll Said :
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this is really good! i liked it alot!!