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When I met him p.3

Romance Created on 8-6-07 Views(813) Story Rating G

He: what do you want to eat?She: I don’t know,  what do you think? He: well  it depend how much money you got?She shocked: oh ok thinking he is so weird He: laughing I was just joking, look at you; you almost had a heart attack She smiling without saying anything He: damn again sorry bad sense of humor, you wanna try their grilled spicy chicken with garlic and lemon?She: sounds tastyHe: ok Hello good evening my name is Me;isa and I will be your waitress today, so can I get you two a drink till you decide about dinner  He: we already decided Waitress: oh is that so, then what can I get you ?He: we want two spicy chiken and 2 sprite She: I will have coke He: but I already ordered for you She: you never askedWaitress: ok ok fine that would be 2 chicken compo with 1 sprite and 1 coke anything on the side chips , onion rings mashed potatos?He: I will have chips  Waitress: what about you?She: I will have onion rings He: they are no good for your health "winkin Waitress: okay do you  want to have salads?He: yes I will have cesar salad with chicken on it nd extra toast nd extra sauce nd it would be lik great if u could lik mix 'em together Waitress: ok and for you?She: I don’t want one, thanks He: oh! You gotta try this one; get her one like mine.  Waitress wth raised eyebrow: okay She thought he is defiantly weird no one EVER not people she knew forever would ever dare to do all of that; what does he thinks of himself! If it wouldn’t be rude I would've like got out ugh! Only if I wasn’t a people pleaser!! He: so tell me more about your selfShe: what do you want to know?He: well how about we have a deal She: huh ? laughing a deal already   he hesitated a bit and like looked at the waitress while she brought the drinks; as soon as she tried to open her straw he took her coke and drank from her straw and  then opened his own drank from his sprite, she looked at him buzzled waiting for him to explain why the heck he would think I would drink after him. Instead of explaining him self he drank his sprite silently leaving her not knowing what to do; would she ask the waitress for another straw; but then it would be rude. And she can't drink from it cuz it just weird. as the salad came in; she asked for some water as she looked at the salad which looked kinda tasty; but still she had all sorts of questions about this guy; many he didn’t even care to explain; why is he like that; Is he doing it intentionally? Does he want to drive her nut? One thing she was sure off he was NOT normal or like any of the other guys she dated before. That’s way too complicated for me to handle she thought; the main dish came in and it wasn’t bad. Talk just flew between the two of them and she got back to feeling comfort around him again. They laughed so hard and there was no awkward moments what so ever. But still she kept thinking about the deal so she got her guts together and asked: you said earlier something about a deal So what was it?He looked at her and laugh: I really don’t remember She: you sure? He; yeah you missed ur chance *laughing* but am sure that it wasn’t such a big deal. She wanted to know soo bad her couristy so she insisted to ask him to remember: you were talking about getting to know me He: I really can't remember.She: ok He would eat from her plate enough to tease her, and his leg kept accidentally touching hers as she stared at him every time it happened he would smile and act like he didn’t know why she was staring. After eating the main plate he ordered some deserts but she didn’t. He: even if you wanted some I wouldn’t order for you; you didn’t even touch your plate!  She smiled so he took a flower from those on the dinner table and gave to her commenting that the flower was staring at him and he can't stand two flowers at once. She was shocked and didn’t even know how to react. He hasn’t got a decent compliment from him all night and now all the sudden; she looked at him shocked as he looked away; she thanked him and put it next to her so he said; am going to tell the manger you stole their flower; she laughed and so did he as his hand slowly touched hers she felt a wave of heat hitting her body as he did. She pulled her hand immediately unconsciously not that she was never touched before but this touch includes feelings. So, most of the time he kept talking; about his family, his hobbies, his intrest and all; she talked about these stuff also but she was brief. He had so much stories to tell; so most of the time he never finish the story because in the middle of the story he would remember other story and they didn’t feel time at all. It was 4 am when they realized how late it is. She:oh my god I cant believe its 4 am already He: I cant believe am 25 already; see we have so much incomn we both cant feel time. She laughing: yeah, my god I never stay up that long. He: oh and now you will have to hitch for a ride home poor youShe: WHAT! Ur not planning to give me a ride home; you have to  He: I can give you a ride home; but not your home.She: hahaha, no thank you I will skip He: you wont regret it; my home is so tidey and I will personally share with you my bed.She: no seriously just give me a lift home. She was getting all intense and worried what did I get my self into she thought    He: no worries eventually you will go home; but there is one place I want to show you and its not my home don’t worry; common what you got to lose; you are an adult and you can take care of yourself; trust me you wont regret it.She: Where do you want to take me at 4 am He: you will see; just have some patienceShe: fine but I don’t want to be lateHe laughing hard: am afraid to be the one to have to tell you this; but you are already late.She smiles: yeh I guess thanks to you!He: and you're welcome She laughs and hit him lightly on his shoulder He: now you gonna have to pay for the Xray She: why is that?He: because I think you broke my shoulder She: oh is that so; so much for a tuff boy He: either pay or you can heal it for free She smiling: how so?He: you can kiss it betterShe: so how much does the x ray costs?He: hahaha … you are funny She: thanks * blushing She: you are to * in a law voice He: huh? What did you say?She: you are pretty funny to He: I can't hear you raise your voice *smiling She: nothing, I said the meal was good He: yeah am stuffed, want to go to pizzahutt now?She: ugh I can't even look at food for the next month!He: So bad I was planning to pay… She: laughing oh what are you waiting for lets go then He laughing: I think am going to forget my pocket in the carThen he pays the check and they go out and leave. He doesn’t use his car rather than walk with her in the street She: so where you taking me?He: didn’t I say it was a surprise She: okay He: so while we get there how about we make things more interestingShe: how?He: We play truth or dare She laughing: are you serious?He: yeah that would be fun She: sure why not He: mwahaha awesome She: I don’t like that laugh He: you shouldn’t! So should I start or will you?She: you go first He: ok truth or dare?She: hmmm, I will go with truth He: is it true that you are such a wimp you wouldn’t take a dare?She laughing: whats that suppose to mean, ofcourse not but I have to trust you firstHe: hope you trust me soon She: okay truth or dare?He: dare She: oh brave man He winking: yip only the best She: ok I dare you to shout …… yeh, shout am gay He: piece of cake! Then he goes in the middle of the dark street and shout with all his might! PEOPLE AM GAY!!! LOVE IS NEVER WRONG!She laughed so hard as one of the people living around shouted back: FUCK YOU WE WANT TO SLEEP. Then he shouted back at him: I would rather fuck you; you seem like a nice guy She couldn’t stop her self from laughing so hard this was crazy.  He went over to his car and got a black bag full of things; she couldn’t see wat inside; for all she knows he could be a criminal as they walked down the place, he could rape her; and then just kill her. Nobody knows who he is; he could run away with it. It was pretty late no one would notice if she screamed; all these thoughts were rushing in her minds; she was so freaking scared she doesn’t even know the guy; why his bag all black, no wonder he picked her; he knew he could be alone with her in matter of time.. oh stupid me how did I get my self into this mess! She noticed there is some sore of liquid in the bag; OMG! There is blood all over this bag; how could be so stupid; I should've listened to my grandma never talk to strangers; at least I wont be dead tomorrow. Stressed out and scared she hardly stops her self from following him. He looked at her with puzzled eyes common we r almost there; She: no .. *shaking                                 ****************

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On April 20th 2008 13kc Said :
13kc great!
On January 12th 2008 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 :)
On August 12th 2007 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole lovinnn it =]
On August 11th 2007 cute0teacher Said :
cute0teacher so , my grandma is not the only person who hates strangers ... heheheh ... u rock ... keep goin
On August 7th 2007 LySsAjAnElL Said :
LySsAjAnElL Very good but make sure the spelling is right. Sometimes when you say he it is supposed to say she...but other then that it is really good i am intruged...keep me posted i want to read the next one!!
On August 7th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 i like it...keep me posted
On August 6th 2007 Plazman Said :
Plazman damn this has such a poor structure to it.. i started reading it and the structure of it was incredibly weak.. i cant go on reading this
On August 6th 2007 Aegle Said :
Aegle ahhhhhhhh its kinda weird, but i love it. I like the conversation between teh sleeping citizien and him. Its nice.
On August 6th 2007 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Wow! I realy love it! So MORE MORE MORE!! :D
On August 6th 2007 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Wow! I realy love it! So MORE MORE MORE!! :D
On August 6th 2007 Ericab409 Said :
Ericab409 More more more!
On August 6th 2007 lenea92 Said :
lenea92 great story. I WANT MORE1 soon please:)
On August 6th 2007 starryboo Said :
starryboo This is really good!!!!!!!
On August 6th 2007 october1015 Said :
october1015 AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! SHE's A WIMP!!! tskt tsk tsk. ok.ok. maybe its paint? in the bag? hmmm. i dont know. lol. MORE!
On August 6th 2007 tece26 Said :
tece26 It is a good story, I wanna keep reading. (but I think she has a right to be a bit scared)
On August 6th 2007 Oddessy65 Said :
Oddessy65 hehehe I LOVE this story! Jeez she is such a scaredy cat! Let me know when the next part comes out! *~xODDx~*
On August 6th 2007 unknownwolfie Said :
unknownwolfie let me know what are your expectations for what happens next...