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between life and death 8 ** Finally ** |
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When I met him
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As he entered the bar, The noise filled his ears with all kind of pleausre. he always loved rock and roll and to watch people dancin the way they feel. expressin themselves, their desires and a flame. that is lit in each nd everyone of them tht only he could see ... all kind of emotions filled his heart as he walked through the crowd toward the bar, and there he saw her. He knew right ahead tht this girl is what he wants.
There was a girl sitting in the bar, staring at her drinks playing with her straw. Million of thoughts goin through her head, she thought she would come here to run away from her everyday stress or so her friends told her. Now she regrets ever coming in here to begin with. Difficult case he thought with a grin he couldn't hide. He always loved compition so he walked his way toward her as she was sitting in the corner wearing her fav long boat which shows the beauty of her legs nd a short skirt. you could only see few of her legs. nd a sleeveless shirt or what ever they call these day. Blue was her color he knew that cause she kept asking the waiter to put a blue straw in her drinks. She drank a little and would look behind her nd see the maddness. wishing that she could be there. once to let go all the fear nd worries, then she smiled as she was watching her friend dancing. then her string of thoughts were cut out by another annoying man. she thought wat this one want this time
HE: Hey !
she didnt reply
He: is this seat is taking
She: yes, my friend is coming nymin
He: oh okay then
and sat right next to her. she thought whats wrong with him. as he turned toward her
He: I wont take long
She suits your self
and back again toward her endless staring
He: you know, you could lose nothing if you had a little chat
he said that without even looking at her and continued as he ordered a lemon juice and insist to have a blue straw
He: you see the world is full of all kind of people actully there is three type of people; people who can count and people who cant
She was thinkin how long will it take him to give up as others had before him; but she knew there was somthin about him... she thought it was funny and couldnt help a grin coming to her face as she finally got his joke. but still she just wanted to make it through the night
he saw her grin as an approval knowing he is going in the right direction.
He:let me be honest with you, I just thought you seemed like an amazing girl and you had such a uniqe personality. am not into girls or anythin ..:
she couldnt help bein totally shock :O why the hell is he talking to me ... he smiled as he saw that on her face and kept his silence. being the noisy girl that she is she had to know what the heck he means by saying that she started movin her legs nervously as she kept wonderin how to phrase her question then he did the unpredeictable.. he dared to put his hand on her leg :O how dare he!! even though it felt good to hav his warm big hand over her hip .. as her body shevered all over ... but she pushed his legs away nd stared at him as in and shouted nevously
She: How dare you, you fuckin moron; I cant believe this !
He: oh I am really sorry, I swear i didnt mean for it to go that way ! ... I just hav this retard habit of doing tht when ever i see some one nervous; nd i couldnt feel my self from stopping ur legs, am truly sorry nd i really didnt mean it tht way !
He looked nervous as she didnt see him tht way the whole night, she couldnt help the grin that was forced on her face as she saw him explaining himself. and she finally gave up and smiled even though she was trying not to; espically after the shock of how she reacted
she: dont you ever touch me like that again am not that kind of girl !
He trying to hide his embaresment knowing she was laughin at him chukles: i know
being the worrier that she is she felt bad for what she had done to him, even though he was just trying to be nice
she: what you said is right
he smiling: I said alot of things tonight and doubt anything was wrong
she as in i cant believe am doin this
he: am sorry, bad since of humor, wat did i say tht was right
she: well, (as she starts blushing) about it wont do any harm if we had a lil chat.
His face couldn't fit his smile as he cleared his throat saying: trust me you wont regret it
She liked about him what she lacked his confidant of how things going to go but couldn't believe him though
He: So ur going to tell me your name or do I have to pick one up
She looking down with embarsment: Nancy, you?
He: sorry cant hear you, you want Pepsi?
She laughing: NO! damn it its Nancy
He: oh allright then pheww thought ur goin to make me pay for a Pepsi
She: Don't worry am more expensive than that
He: I can always get you water ;)She: no, thanks!
He: you sure? Cuz I will get one right away its ok
She: its ok
He: as you like then,
Awkward silence for couple minutes then he interrupted it
He: what do you do nancy?
She: well, actually I have 3 jobs now
He: interesting! What are they?
She: I am a baby sitter, I have a job at a warranty place and I do massages…
He: would you like to dance?
She shockingly says: no I don't dance
He pulls her hand and led her upstairs as she follows why? She doesn't know, she just felt it would be ok with him. Actually for once in her life she felt safe with someone. He led her to the second floor, to her shock slow dancing. He doesn't seem like that kind of guy. She smiled as she remembered how bad she is at slow dancing; he did some rock nd roll moves which were totally out of the context only to make her laugh. Then he got all serious and held her close. His big steady hand knew it way behind her back while the other felt her hand as he held her hand. Then, they started floating around. If anyone would've seen what it looked like from the outside they would be on the ground laughing. But they both felt happy, rebellious; for once in her life she didn't worry about what people would think. She just let her defense down and went on with it after all like he said she will lose nothing. She moved her arm over his neck as he pulled her closer holding her sides. Their breath started to go heavy she could no longer run from his eyes cuz it keeps chasing her wherever she goes. She didn't want to give; he talked in whisper only to make sure she looked at his lips. And his heart said everything as she could feel it beating against hers. She closed her eyes allowing her heart to do the rest. She could feel him coming closer her heart is beating faster and faster as his lips touched hers. It wasn't her first time to kiss a guy, but it never was that magical. He started nipping at her lower lip to make her open her mouth; as she did it without feeling. Then softly he kept kissing her as his arm held her closer and they didn't want to let go. She knew that's not her style; and there were a million of voices telling her not to do it. But she didn't care because it just felt so right to be there.
To be continued ....
Comments
| On April 20th 2008 13kc Said : | |
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good story but the spelling could be better keep me posted |
| On March 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Cooool ♥ it! |
| On January 22nd 2008 bbydeath157 Said : | |
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I don't care about the grammer. I just love it :D |
| On January 12th 2008 Smarties4 Said : | |
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lol, I think I've read this chapter about 4 times now!! (see, that's how many times I've started to read this story and just haven't got to the next part!!) Anyway, I'm going to read part 2 NOW! lol, great write :) |
| On November 14th 2007 Khmerfriendz Said : | |
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the story was hard to read cause it was soo ginormuse !! but it was awesomee:) |
| On October 8th 2007 CCokay Said : | |
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that was alsome!!!!
thanks |
| On September 1st 2007 eternallpain Said : | |
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I love it!!!!! :D |
| On August 12th 2007 BiAnIcole Said : | |
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defff reallly good =] |
| On August 8th 2007 cute0teacher Said : | |
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WOW!!! i donno what 2 say |
| On August 6th 2007 Aegle Said : | |
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Spelling bad, txt to big. But Over all. I LOVED IT!!! |
| On August 3rd 2007 tece26 Said : | |
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I think its great! I understtod it fine. Let me know how it continues. |
| On August 3rd 2007 RoKkErBiTcH Said : | |
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i agree wit the spelling part, but besides that its really good! keep me posted! |
| On August 3rd 2007 october1015 Said : | |
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I like it. but was kinda confusing at times. fix that, and you're good to go. keep me posted! |
| On August 3rd 2007 lenea92 Said : | |
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good story keep me posted |
| On August 3rd 2007 unknownwolfie Said : | |
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thanx alot .. nd yep i guess so .. i will next time |
| On August 3rd 2007 melibeans10 Said : | |
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need to work on ur spelling it gets confusing sometimes.. but besides that pretty good |


