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Eternal Suffering 5

Creative Created on 3-27-08 Views(46) Story Rating G

        The light felt like fire on my retinas and my skin burned from it, which proves how long I've been into the abyss and yet this isn't the top floor yet, but i will get there soon enough. I walked toward the bathroom near the left of me and began to take off my clothes which were covered in blood. The top of me was too since I didn't believe in wearing a shirt. I turned the hot water to max and walked in letting the steam take what left of my victims from my skin. 

         After about ten minutes I looked down realizing that i couldn't tell from excess blood on my skin and my skin in general because of how red i was. So i turned the water off, got out and started drying myself off. I walked into my room and found and extra pair of clothes and got dressed. The extent of my world is this house, I want more. I went to the desk near my bed and sat to write my newest kills into a book. I have several tomes filled with knowledge of different tortures and yet i still feel incomplete. I feel the urge for more.

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On June 9th 2008 undeadsraven Said :
undeadsraven this part was just to wrap up the call of my story, the threshold will be much longer.
On June 6th 2008 missy3006 Said :
missy3006 the stories get better and better but you should keep them long so that there is more information on whats going on.. i realy like how gory it is though
On April 18th 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 I agree it was a little short. But I still really like it! Great job!
On April 8th 2008 onaipwolf Said :
onaipwolf A little short and convoluted, but I really like the tone of your work. It kind of reminds me of American Psycho. It has a little bit of the same feel to it.