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the darkest form of my mind begged to hear this woman suffer so i walked toward her. she said little toward me, all I heard was a few whimpers cross her lips which angered me, usually my victims are4 screaming by now. after I reached her, I placed a knife on her skin just below her collar bone and dug it in until i felt resistance. screamming began, much better. slowly i slid down her stomach while she screamed but it was a high scream with her begging to let her go. After I hit her pelvus bone, I stopped and took my knife from her skin. Struggle she did and I would wait til she stopped for me to continue. This did not take long for all her strength was in the pain she has just felt
I grabbed the two sides of her skin and tore her open exposing her insides. My ears were pierced to the point where hearing wasnt possible by her screech. My fun was over, I just want it to stop, so broke her ribs and stabbed her lungs onto them. She can choke on her own blood now, itll a slow enough death for her. I walked out of the room and back to the floor which heald light. I havent walked up them for near 2 days so it felt strange to go up the endless steps.
The door opened and light flooded threw it as the darkness ran back. This was my final floor, I hate it so.
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| On December 28th 2007 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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I agree with Onaipwolf. Really good on detailing her pain. Just a few mistakes but you are getting better :D Can't wait for the next chapter, it's getting good. Keep me posted! :D |
| On December 26th 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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Wow. The detail of his torture is very well done. I would keep in mind to spell check before you post though. A lot of errors can be corrected if you check before you post. Let me know when the next one is up. ;) |
| On December 23rd 2007 SoraDemon Said : | |
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yaa me loves it KMP please |
| On December 21st 2007 vollygal456 Said : | |
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wow i loved it keep me posted plz i loved it omg keep writing more
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