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Fallen
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It was a winder day, and I was taking a walk in the woods. When I found a dying young man. He was tall and had short dark brown hair, with brown eye's. He was lying in the snow, he was breathing very slowly, his eyes was closed. I sat beside him, and picked up his hand. I didn't know what to do. It began to rain, I started to sing him, I was sing the Family Song, the ony song I could think of. There were so many question going through my mind, and I didn't know if I should ask them. Just then his eyes opended, and I saw him clearly for the first time, my breath was gone, I could breath and look at his face, I couldn't... because I saw him befor. He was the man from my nightmares, he was the man that filled me with fear everytime I saw him. He was the man that made me cry out in the middle of the night.
He had a face of an angel, and he reminded me of the devil. The things I saw him do, the things I heard him say, made shivers run down my back.
"Who are you?" His voice was like ice, cold. The voice of the fallen.
" I was going to ask you the same thing. What are you doing out here in the snow? Who did this to you?" My voice was low, and I didn't think he heard me, because he answered a minute later.
"I was leave for my sisters house, and I triped over a rock and hit my head. The next thing I knew, you were hold my hand and singing. What is your name?" He closed his eyes and layed back down, and for a minute I forgot all about my nightmares.
"My name is Akasha. What is your's?" I asked, I could help but wonder what his name was.
He was laying down in the snow, I picked up his head and placed it in my lap. He didn't open his eyes, but a smile was across his lips.
"My name is Valiente. Why are you helping me, why are you even out here this late." I wanted to tell him that he was the man from my nightmares, he was the man that but fear into my bones at night. I couldn't, something stopped me.
"i'm helping you, because you looked like you were lost and hurt. I'm out here, because I love the woods, its so pretty when the snow covers the trees." I said. He said nothing for a long time, I thought that he went back to sleep, but I was wrong.
"Do you know that you have a beautieful voice. You sound like someone i use to know." I colsed my eye's the sun was going down, and the air was becoming even colder. I had to get him back to the house. Then I heard a noice, low and far away. It was comming toward us, and He heard it too.
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| On July 15th 2008 lonely244444 Said : | |
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KMP please! What is the noise |
| On July 15th 2008 universalxlove Said : | |
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kmp. interestinggg.((: good job! |
| On July 15th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said : | |
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hmm ? kmp i like it something spooky about it :) hmm mght go read a horror :P |
| On July 15th 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On July 15th 2008 twilightx28 Said : | |
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Valiente. Very nice. kmp. |
| On July 15th 2008 ForgottinHopes Said : | |
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i like it :] please kmp |
| On July 15th 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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I like it, plz kmp! |
| On July 15th 2008 mysterywhateve Said : | |
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Hmm I wonder who it is kmpp! |


