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Romance Created on 6-8-08 Views(57) Story Rating G

My finger were  inter locked with his, as we walked done the beach. The sun was just about set, and the ocean was many different colors. I looked over at him, his black hair was all over the place. He had the most amazing smile, almosy anglic. His eye's were breath taking. The color of the ocean themselves. He took his habd and touched my face, lightly. The power behind his hands, made me feel weak, but not scared. His lips lightly brushed mine, thne he pulled away. There was heat rising in my face. I was lost looking into his eye's that I didn't even here what he said.

"Ace, did you hear me?" I blinked, moving my eyes away from his, I answered.

"No, sorry what did you say?" My eyes were glued to the sand, my cheek were cheeks burning. Just then I felt something on my ear. His breath. His worm soothing breath.  

Wake up Ace, wake up."

   My head snaped up. My eyes went to my sister standing in the door way. She was smiling. The sun was high in the sky, and the heat was already setting in.

"So what were you dreaming about? Sounded good from where I'm standing." She started to laugh to her self. My cheeks started to turn bright red, which caused her to laugh even more.

"Was I talking in my sleep?" I asked, i didn't have the nurve to look into her eye, I knew that if I did my cheeks would become as red as a rose. Even darker.

"I would say alittle more then talking. By the way, who's this guy anyways?" There was slince for sometime. I couldn't tell her that I have been dreaming of thsi guy ever since i could remember. He was the only one, I trusted. Part of me believes that the only reason that I trusted him, was because he wasn't real. Sad, but true. So I told her the only thing I could think of.

"He's was a guy from my math class, he's in an older grade." She didn't say anything after that. She just waslked out of my room, to leave me to dresses for the day. School had just ended, and i couldn't be happier, but there was a feeling inside myself, It felt like there was something missing, a whole.

I got out of bed, and walked over to my mirror. I looked at myself, like I did every morning. I had long broenish red hair, that went to the middle of my back. My eye's were the color of Jade, and my skin was creamy white. My body was normal, I wasn't big, or small, just normal. And like every morning, the same thought went through my mind, if I looked this way, why didn't anyone like me? I couldn't think of an answer so, I went to the bathroom to get ready for the day,

After my shower, I  dressed in blue jeans and a dark blue tank top, with light blue hearts all over it. I went down to my living room, to find my mom on the love seat, reading the paper. It was just my mom, my sister and me, now a days. My father had past away, many years ago.

"What you up to mom?" I asked as I too a seat next to her.

"Nothing really, Kelly called she said to meet her at the beach in a half in hour." She said, without taking her eye's from the paper. I got up and walked over to the frny door, and pulled on my flip folps. 

"Mom, I'm going now, I'll be back later!" I called as I shut the front door. My mom had said something else, but i couldn't hear it through the thick wooden door. Ten minutes later i was walk along the beach. Kelly wasn't there, no surprise there, she was always late for something.

As I made my way over to a spot where there wasn't that many people, I triped and landed on my butt. I cursed my self as i pulled myself up. Standing in front of me had to nothing more than a God.

A.N.---- Okay, this is the first story I have written in some time, now it would mean at to me if you guys told me what you think. angain, Tell me nicely. There is most likely words that are spelled wrong, againg sorry for that. If anyone had any idea's , i'm opend to them. Thank you Twilight023.

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On July 7th 2008 edwardlover92 Said :
edwardlover92 nice, and i wonder who dream boy is hmmmmmm
On June 16th 2008 Blueeyedgirl92 Said :
Blueeyedgirl92 i like it i agree with the others it does catch your attention.well ima gonna go now and read the others kmp.
On June 14th 2008 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 I like it Mia. The dream guy has black hair and blue eyes, huh? Now, why does that sound so familiar? Very good and I agree with gikmo9. It does get your attention. If you post more, let me know.
On June 8th 2008 gikmo9 Said :
gikmo9 i like it. u immediately get people's attention and u described the characters very well. some people (like me) have trouble doing that.kmpp
On June 8th 2008 twilight023 Said :
twilight023 okay i just re-read this and i found miss spelled words, sorry i have to remember to look over things. anyways thank you for reading this.