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Young True love 5

Other Created on 8-26-07 Views(141) Story Rating G

Anna’s POV

 

I was sitting in math class think about if I should talk to Nick. He has been acting weird around me, and only talking to me after I asked him something. The teacher was going on about angels or something. I was to busy think about how much I like him. Maybe I should ask him over. No that would be a real bad idea, what would I say? What would we do? My mom didn’t get out of work till 9:00pm, so I didn’t have to worry about her. But the one thing I was worried about was…

“Miss Catalina, do you know the answer?” my cheeks started to turn red. I felt like I was going to fall over and die.

“Hey, the answer is 49 dredgers.” nick whispered, behind me. Mr. Dimmed ( weird name right) gave Nick a scary look.

“Umm… The answer is 49.” I said as I looked to the floor. My eyes were glued there.

“Well I hope you say thank you to your friend, Miss Catalina.” Mr. Dimmed walked back to the bored. And started talking again about something I didn’t quite get. I grabbed a piece of paper and started writing.

Hey nick, thanks for the help. Umm I was wondering if you wanted to come over my house to day, after school. Maybe we can talk. Or work on homework. Whatever you want to do.

Anna Catalina

I turned around and placed the note on his desk. He picked it up and started reading. From what I cold see, he had a smile on his face. He picked up his blue ball point pen and started writing something.

Hey Anna, it was nothing, I saw that you needed help. Well if it alright with you yea, sure I’ll love to come over. But first I have to go home and do some stuff. Where do you live??

 

He passed the note back to me. I picked it up and read it over. I was smiling so bad that I was sure that he saw me. I loved his blue eye’s. they were a color I have never seen before. As I thought about him, something clawed its way into my brain. This was the guy from most of my dreams. Why I didn’t notice this before was a mystery to me. I picked up the note and began to write.

This is great. I live at 128 Meridian Ave. See you there…

 

I handed him the note just as the bell rang. The day flue by in a blur, I don’t really remember anything from that day. When the day ended, Nick and I said our good-byes, for now. It was going to come over around 4:30. This gave me an hour and a half to get ready. As I walked home I realized, that I didn’t know anything about boys. I had never before had a boyfriend, or had a boy over. What was I going to do? The only idea I had was to talk to my sister. I didn’t want to do this, but it was the only thing I could do. Wow I never thought I would sell my soul to the devil, just to look good for a guy.

I walked into the front door, to find Rosie sitting on the love sit and read one of her love story books. I dropped my stuff by the door as I closed it. I walked over to her and took the set next to her.

“Umm… Rosie, can I ask you something?” I felt like a loser. I has never before this day asked her for anything.

 

“What can I do ya for?” She asked me, not even looking up from her book.

“Well…Umm… I’m having a boy over and I need your help.” The last part came out in a rush, but she knew what I had said. Her eye’s got bit, she bunny eared her page, and looked at me.

“Your what? “ She asked me, like she didn’t understand me the first time.

“I’m having a guy over. Can you help me?” I said slower this time so her little brain could understand me.

“ OH MY GOD!!!!!” She screamed at the top of her lungs. I think I lost me hearing because of her.

“ Well will you?” I asked her. There was something in my voice, that I didn’t understand. This scared me , more than she did.

“Okay, what time is he coming over?” She asked as she pulled me up to her room. It was blue and purple. I love her room, there were painted stares on her ceiling, and there was a moon, in the middle. It look just like the real deal.

“ He’ll be here at 4:30.” she started to grab her make-up bag and curling ironer, and started to look through her dresser for an outfit I could wear. She took down my hair from its pony-tail , and started to brush it. She started with my hair first, she curled it so that it looked like a curly bob. After it was all curled, she attacked me with the hair spray. I had to yell that I couldn’t breath, before she stopped. Than she made me try on about 30 different outfit’s, and shoes. She final decided that she like me in jeans, and a nice blue and black top, that went off the shoulders. And a pair of black heals with an open toe. I didn’t know that you had to paint your toe nails, when you are wearing open toe shoes. You learn something everyday. After my hair was done and my hair too, she started on my make-up. She stared with some cover up, than moved on to eyeliner. Little on the bottom, and a little more on the top. Then she moved to eye shadow, a nice shade of blue. Than it was lip glosses. A nice clear color, with a little sparkle.

“ Your all done! You look great.” She was so happy, about her work. I was scared to look in the mirror. When I did , what I saw took my breath away. I had never before looked this good. I looked like a princess.

“I love, I really do. But isn’t this a little to much?” I asked not quite sure what the hell I was doing.

“Nothing is ever to much, when it comes to looking good.” she said smiling. I walked over to her and hugged her. This was one of the moments that we never had before.

“ If you ever tell anyone I hugged you I swear I’ll saying your lying.” we laughed at what I said. Then I door bell rang.

“ Stay here, I’ll get it, then call you down.” She said as she walked down to get the door. I heard her say I was up stares, and then he said something I didn’t get.

“ Anna, Nick’s here.” Rosie yelled, I walked down the stares to meet him at the door. His eyes got big for only a minute.

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On July 27th 2008 Peanutjr8 Said :
Peanutjr8 ahhhh! i love this!!! it's sooooooo good!
On September 8th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 He's gonna get all weird because she's not being herself right?? This should be interesting.
On September 7th 2007 melibeans10 Said :
melibeans10 i love it. just read all of them. keep me posted
On August 31st 2007 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox keep me posted!!
On August 27th 2007 edwardlover92 Said :
edwardlover92 oh I love it, as always keep me posted
On August 26th 2007 kccheer1492 Said :
kccheer1492 Oh i love your stories keep me posted plz! ps my b/f's name is nick lol! Love ur stories!
On August 26th 2007 ybeth09 Said :
ybeth09 good =] keep me posted!
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On August 26th 2007 metal4lifebaby Said :
metal4lifebaby great writing....keep me posted plz