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The seventh child (2)
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 Created on 2-7-08
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The rain pounded fouriocely at the car as we spead down the highway. But it was drowned out by darin’s complaining.
Auhhhhhh come on! Darin moaned.
I was twiddling with my mothers’ pentagram necklace.You know that thing makes you seem like a witch Shania pointed out.
It was my mothers.
So. Was your mother a witch?I shrugged I never really asked let alone cared.
Why don’t you ask her? I looked at her through narrow eyesI had only known Shania and her brother for a year now they were cool but sometimes they could be so tempting to punch.But I couldn’t blame her I don’t think I ever told her that my mother was dead she probably assumed that Anna was my mother.Dan coughed probably trying to change the subject. He knew how much the conversation could hurt me.
We should be there in an hour or so. Dan announced.
I
mani groaned. I don’t think I can take anymore of darin’s complaining.Me to derrick chimed.
Shut –up. Darin snapped would you like to drive in this crappy weather.
Yelling at it is not going to do anything.Imani pointed out.It helps me.
Why don’t we just stop at a hotel? I suggested. Just till it passes.Right when I said that the sky started to clear.
Hmm looks like we’re friends with Mother Nature. Derrick joked. Within the hour we made it to my house. Dan got out with me because he left his car in my driveway. After the other left Dan gave me another one of his warm hugs.
He whispered in my ear. Are you going to be ok?
all is fine.
Are you sure I could stay
No you go home your little brothers probably pacing around the house waiting for you.He gave me one more squeeze got in his car and left.I found Craig in his study working on a project of his.
Hey Hun how was the trip?
Fine.
Did you have fun?
Loads. I found that I could only answer Craig with a one word answer or a yes and hmmm. Where’s Anna?She went to the store she should be home soon.
Ok ill see yah later.
Hmmm hmmm.My bedrooms not that big but big enough with my bed, dresser, mirror, desk and trunk, it gave me enough room to get around.I dumped out my stuff on my bed and organized it back into my closet.I plopped down on my bed with a sigh when I was done the rain started to come down again making the sky darken.I soon fell asleep.My dream seemed to be in a third person state.I saw me sitting in a chair my back facing me.As I neared toward myself I began to hear a voice.“Live lives in peace not hate”As I walked closer the voice got louder.“Have a big heart”I reached out to touch my shoulder.“Shannon the voice whispered’’Shannon live life in peace’’In the chair I strode up and slowly turnedI gasped.It wasn’t me it was my mother, that’s where the voice was coming from.She wore the pentagram necklace around her neck and she kept repeating herself
Live life in peace not hate, live life in peace not hate
Mom I whispered.
Her eyes were closes.
Mom I said aloud
Her eyes openedThey weren’t the same as I remembered they were white and a pentagram figure was the pupils.Remember your heritage she said finally.I woke up.My room was darkened by night. I could hear Anna working in the kitchen.I sat up on my bed and wiped the dew from my forehead.I the sense of a paranormalist I would have been stoked by my dream but being a realistic im kind of freaked.I slowly trudged my way to the kitchen where I could smell that Anna was cooking beef stroganaph
Good evening sleepy how was the trip? She smiled.
Great. It was a lot of fun.I sat at the bar and played relentlessly at a strand of my hair.Anna saw my mood and stopped what she was doing. She came over and draped an arm over my shoulder.
I know today’s a hard day sis I really do. But mom or dad wouldn’t want you mopping around like this.
I know I played with my necklace.
She let go. I don’t understand why you wear that thing.
Why not?
Makes you look gothic.
It was moms.
Speaking of moms things what’s in the trunk?
I don’t know
Are you going to find out?
No
I don’t think mom gave it to you to not open.
She told me not to until im ready, im not ready yet.
O-k she sighed. The next morning I met up with derrick and the trouble mint twins at the local bowling ally.
Hey Shannon Derrick greeted.
Hey guys.
Hey. Shania and darin chorused. They had there noses stuck in the news paper.
What’s up with them?
There reading the news.
Wow there’s a shocker.
There’s something in there about the death toll that’s hacking up police are starting to think the possibility of a serial killer.
Seems like you’ve read it.
A-matter-of-fact I did, very interesting.Come on lets go it our shoes. I laughed.
Size eleven please.
Nine and a half. Thank you.We sat down to put our shoes on.
So where’s Tanya?
She’s visiting her grandmother in main.Tanya and Derrick had been having some trouble lately that’s why she didn’t come on the trip with us. I bowled a perfect 100 the trouble mint twins were to preoccupied by the paper that they didn’t even play.I did hear about it on the new last night the reporter sounded persistentDeath toll is rising, locals are getting worriedOver the past weeks families have been brutally murdered in there homes.The families range from whites Hispanics African-American Asian or port Rican,The only linked to one another is the size of the family.Many have had only two children.Police have no leads but are on the case with claws.We had and interview with Sheriff Pete Thomas today and he had this to say“This creep, freak will not get away your homes will be safe once moreWe ask that all families lock there door and don’t open them if you don’t know the person”Well have more for you later im Havana Steven twelve o’clock newsThey had a special tourtrial on the families in remembrance.Thirteen families’ altogether Who could do this?
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Please Login to post comments| On February 7th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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Personally, I still think it's good. kmp |
| On February 7th 2008 brokenwings122 Said : | |
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You do know that in bowling a perfect game is 300 not one hundred right? You're dialogue is good in content but your not doing it in the right format.
"Dialog is like this," said Caiti.
Also, you need some subject verb agreement. But your plot and story lines are very good. If you ever need any help don't hesitate to ask. Kmp. |
