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Fiction Created on 6-12-08 Views(52) Story Rating G

We decided to stop at McDonald's to grab a quick meal, since it was getting late. I didn't eat a whole lot, just a grilled honey mustard chicken snack wrap and a small frie. I couldn't forget the sweet tea. Man, did that taste good. I guzzled it down so fast, Ryan was laughing the whole time and everytime I took a sip.

As we were sitting in the car eating, we watched deer run out in front of the car.

"Look!" I shouted.

"Someone or something must've spooked 'em." he replied, as his mouth was full.

Silence...

"Hey, can I ask you a quick question?" Ryan asked.

"Yeah," I said.

"I don't think it's my buisness, but what happened that you and your ex, that made you two break up in the first place? I mean I just met you and all and I don't think anyone would want to turn you down." he stated.

Why is he being so nice? I wondered. He's making me blush so much.

"Well, we both had jobs and they were both different, plus we had odd work schdules so we barely saw each other. So, he suggested we see other people." I explained.

"That's a lousy ass excuse!" he hollered.

I look over at him as I took a sip of my sweet tea. I was majorly confused in why he said that.

"Sorry, I didn't mean to sound rude. I just thought it was kind of dumb that he would say that. Couldn't you change you schdule with your bosses?" he suggested.

"Dave's job's very strict in what he does and doesn't do. Bascially, he works 22/5 and he barely has time to sleep anymore. At least that's what he told me anyway." I replied. By the expression on Ryan's face, he wasn't buying it, I could just tell. "It's the truth."

"No I believe you, but I don't think I believe him." he said.

"What?"

"You mean you don't know if he's telling you the truth or not? How do you know he couldn't be lying to your face?" he stated.

"Gee, I never thought about that, but Dave's one of the most honest guys I know. He would never lie to me." I told him.

"Never?"

"Never," I replied.

He smiled. I could tell Ryan cared, but not all that much. We just met in all so I can understand why. After he dumped his ice cream on me by accident, he seems to be doing all he can to cheer me up so I don't have to keep thinking about it.

Could Ryan be right though? Would Dave actually lie to me? Does that mean he's cheating on me?

 

 

 

 

[Authors Note: Sorry it took so long for me to post this. Also, sorry for it being short and boring. Please tell me what you think though. Thanks!]

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On June 17th 2008 lalarubio23 Said :
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On June 12th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
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