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Fiction Created on 6-5-08 Views(70) Story Rating G

Ding Dong!

I heard the door bell ring as I was putting my diamond stud earrings in my ears. I wasn't trying to impress him, I was just making sure I didn't look like a slob. I ran over to the door and answered it. Mr. Gorgegous was standing right in front of my eyes. Then I remembered, I never knew what his name was.

"What's your name?" I asked.

"Well, that was a nice greeting." he replied.

"Sorry it's just I never got your name." I said.

He chuckled. "I'm Ryan. What's your name?"

"Denise," I stated.

"I love that name." he told me.

"Are you just saying that?" I questioned.

"No, I'm serious. I've always like that name." he exclaimed.

I blushed a little. "Well, we better get going, right?" I said, as I headed out the door.

"Yeah, we probably should." he stated, as he closed the door behind us.

                                                    ***

Once we arrived at the Pizza Palace, I sat in the car for the longest time, as Ryan was staring at me, wondering why I didn't get out of the car yet. I didn't know why either.

"Are you going to get out someday?" he asks me.

"Ryan, I don't think this is such a good idea. I barely know you. It doesn't seem right knowing that I'm with you. I just broke up with someone yesterday and I'm still recovering from it. I'm sorry if I'm being a pain." I told him.

"You aren't a pain. I know exactly what you are going through. I just broke we my girlfriend about two weeks ago and we've together since high school. I'm just getting over her now." he explains.

"Really?" I ask.

"Yeah and I shouldn't have invited you for a date if you were still getting over someone. I understand."

"No, it's fine."

"But do you wanna go somewhere instead?" he offers.

I nodded. "Yeah, I guess that would be alright." I smile.

Ryan started the car back up and he pulled out of the parking lot.

"You know, I never really noticed it til now, but you very nice tonight." he states. "You probably would look even better without make-up."

My face got red. Dave said I always looked good in make-up but never said anything about being good without it.

"Are you lying?" I smirk.

"No, honest."

"Thanks," I blush.

I couldn't believe it. I only met this guy earlier today and I seem to be falling for him. I don't even think he likes me that much. But what do I know.

 

 

NOTE: Sorry it's short!

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