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the wisper (part 1 of 15)

Creative Created on 6-11-09 Views(89) Story Rating PG

this is a story about  a young female named Rikku that becomes freinds with a summoner named Rose. she was walking on a beach near her house then all of a sudden she passed out. when she woke up she was on a beach far away from home.

(quiet and peacefull while rose is looking out to sea)

a voice from behind "Lady Rose you have a guest." Rose replys "who is it?" the man says "he doen't say his name" rose replys "ok send him" the man says "ok but it a female"

(the man goes and gets her and then the woman appears)

"ummmmm are you lady rose" rose replys "yes i am and why have you came here" she replys im not sure i woke up on the beach" Rose says "if you want our protection you must tell me your name" she says "my name is Rikku" ok return to the temple and i will be there" Rikku says "ok"

(they head to the temple and they were attacked by a wolf)

Rose "you have a wepon?" Rikku replys "no why" "fine i will do it my self" "ok....hey i foubd a knife" "good use it" (Rikku charges and cuts its head off) Rose says "wow 1 hit you want to be a gaurdian" Rikku replays "sure why not"

(walks in the temple the 3 people walk to them)

Rose says "this is Rikku (points at each of them) thats Star my mage, Morgu my warrior, and Blade my spear man he doesnt talk much. Star and Morgu says "nice to meet you Rikku. so what is she?" Rose replys "shes our rouge cause she killed a wolf with 1 hit with a knife" Morgu replys "a knife...not bad but not good enough Rikku follow me" (Rikku follows Morgu to a chest behind a statue) Morgu says "pick you want a dagger or 2 blades" Rikku replys "dagger i want a dagger" (Morgu grabs the dagger and hands it to Rikku)

(5 days later when there ready to leave the island)

Monk "you ready to leave Lady Rose" Rose replys "yes i am" monk replys "the boat is here and Rikku is waiting for you" Rose replys "thank you" (rose comes down the stairs) Rikku jumps up in exitment "your ready to leave yay ^.^" (as they walk out side every one on the island is waving good bye and giving Rose charms when they got to the boat Rose said her final speech and they left the island)

this was just the begging of the story

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On August 26th 2009 Taulha Said: 
Taulha Wisper is spelled Whisper.
On June 13th 2009 truelovers09 Said: 
truelovers09 the picture is Rikku
On June 11th 2009 mannie512927 Said: 
mannie512927 awesome keep going!!
On June 11th 2009 truelovers09 Said: 
truelovers09 there will be more people to meet you just met the heros