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The Evil Next Door

Fiction Created on 5-23-08 Views(34) Story Rating G

IN CLUB CLUB PENGUIN, THERE IS A PINK PRINCESS CASTLE. BUT NEXT DOOR IS AN EVIL OPENING TO A FREAKY PLACE. AT THE START ITS GOT: A TORN RED CARPET, EYES-LOOKING WINDOWS ON THE CASTLE WHICH ALSO LOOK LIKE THEIR MAD, A SHARP DOOR OPENING, A PITCH BLACK STAIR CASE, FIRE BALLS ON EACH SIDE OF THE DOOR AND A SCAREY LAUGH THAT SOMETIMES COME OUT OF THE WINDOWS. THE PINK  CASTLE HAS GOT: PRETTY FLOWERS BLOSSOMING A NICE LITTLE RIVER, A PRETTY BRIDGE AND A PERFECT-PICTURE CASTLE ITS ALSO NICE AND CLEAN.


IT ALL STARTED ON DAY AT THE CASTLE, THE LOVELY PRINCESS WAS OUT SIDE PLAYING IN THE FLOWERS WHEN SHE HEARD A SOUND, A GROUCHY ROTTEN SCAREY SOUND! SHE SCREAMED. THEN SHE RAN INSIDE. SHE SAT AT HER TEA TABLE AND LOOKED UP AT MOOSE HEAD (A MOOSES HEAD ON THE WALL.) AND SAID " OHH MOOSE HEAD, IM SO FRIGHTENED AT THAT EVIL VCASTLE. WHAT SHOULD I DO?" MOOSEY JUST LOOKED STRAIGHT-ON. THEN AFTER A WHILE SHE WENT OUTSIDE AGAIN AND PLAYED WITH HER FAVOURITE BALL. SHE THREW IT BUT UH OH IT WENT UP AND THEN INTO THE EVIL CASTLES WINDOW! SO SHE WENT TO FIND HER BEST FRIEND IN THE KNIGHT CLUB. SHE SAW HIM JUMPING ON  ONE OF THE SPEAKERS AND WAS JUMPING UP AND DOWN AS USUALL. SHE WALKED OVER TO HIM AND ASKED "OHH PUFF, MY FAVE BALL WET IN THE EVIL CASTLE, SO CAN U COME WITH ME TO GET IT? OHH PLEASE" SHE GAVE HIM THE PUPPY EYES. "OK" HE SAID. SO THEY WENT TO THE  ROYAL ARCADE AND SAT DOWN IN FRONT OF A PIECE OF PAPER AND A PEN. THEY GOT ALL THE FRIENDS THEY COULD KNOW AND THINK OF. "OK, HUDDLE UP " I SUGGESTED. HEN WE MADE OUR PLAN.


PRINCESSES 2 OTHER FRIENDS KNOCKED ON THE EVILS DOOR.
"WHAT DO U WANT!!!!!!!!!" A TERRIFYING SCREAM SOUNDED. "UHHH... WE'RE HERE TO SELL BLACK PUFF`S. THEY`RE GREAT FOR BAD STUFF LIKE STEALING AND THAT." THE EVIL WIDENED HIS EYES WITHA GREEDY SMILE. "I'LL BUY THEM ALL!" HE SAID." BUT YOU NEED TO SIGN THESE CONTRACTS"YELLOW PUFF SAID. EVIL SIGHED.GOT THE PEN AND UN SCROLLED THE PAPER. IT WAS ABOUT 4 METRES LONG.WHILE HE DID THAT PRINCESS SNEAKED IN THE WINDOW FOLLOWED BY GREEN PUFF. BUT THEY REALISED THAT THE CASTLE WASNT MUCH SO THEY GRABBE THE BALL AND WENT DOWN THE STAIRS LEADING TO THE FRONT DOOR.


WHEN SUDDENLY THEY SAW EVIL STANDING THEIR WITH A LOVE HEART APRON ON. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?" HE GROUCHED. WE COULDNT SPEAK SO EVIL DID FOR US "WANT A COOKIE?" HE ASKED POLITELY. "UHH OK" ME AND GREEN PUFF SAID. SO WE TOOK A COOKIE AND EVIL TOOK US TO A NICE LITTLE ROOM, AND SAT US DOWN WITH SOME CUPS OF TEA.

HE WAS ACTUALLY REALLY NICE. 2 HOURS PAST SO WE WENT HOME SATISFIED. THE WHOLE TOWN AND EVIL WERE ALL FRIENDS.

AND WE LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER. THE END....

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