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That one Plane 2

Creative Created on 6-8-08 Views(66) Story Rating G

Chapter 2

Abby’s Point of View.

As I was waking up I would here the ocean, ugh, I must be in an amazing dream. That’s all I thought until I felt waves hit my legs, and all of a sudden a burning sensation filled my leg where the water had just hit. I screamed out in pain. As I opened my eyes, I felt sand on my face. So before opening them any farther I decided to make sure I wouldn’t get any in my eyes. I brushed the sand off my face and as I opened my eyes, the sun blinded me. As my eyes adjusted to the bright ness I looked at my leg where the burning had lowered from painful to a slight sting. All I saw was ripped pants one shoe and a deep gash in my left leg with blood dripping out of it. Other wise I just had bruises and little scratches. All of a sudden Will came to my mind, along with what I just went through. Will, where was he? I looked around and saw burnt body’s, plane parts, scattered suit cases, a random burnt Barbie with no hair and a black face. I was what I though was Will but it turned out to be Bobby who was in pain. His arm was burnt and had a bigger gash than I did in my leg. I limped around and searched the bodys praying I wouldn’t find Will one of the ones that weren’t living.

Will’s Point of View.

I woke up with salt water filling my mouth. And the tide rising. I looked around and all I was was Brittany, Libby and a couple burnt body’s. I checked over my body and nothing major happened. The biggest thing was a dark bruise on my arm. It looked like I slammed it into glass and it didn’t cut me but bruised me. Abby, was all I could think about.

"Will!!!!!" Brittany screamed from behind me, as I looked over to her she was surrounded by dead body’s, on was her sister.

"Her Brit," and I put my hand out for her to grab. I helped her away from her sisters body, and helped Libby up.

"We have to find everyone else," with that we walked a mile of the beach finding nothing but suit cases and body’s. Luckily no one we knew. As we got to the end of the beach we saw through a bunch of palm trees another beach with people moving, on looked like Abby.

As we got through the trees I yelled Abbys name and the girl who I though was her looked at me. I was the pain in her eyes, along with love and passion. It was Abby. She came running to me, well more like limping and jumped into my arms. I hugged her and pulled her away. Tears stained her sand covered face. Then I pulled her in for a passionate kiss interrupted by the devil herself, Brittany.

"Um I think Bobby’s hurt. Will come help me see what’s wrong."

I put down Abby and went over to Bobby, and knew right away what to do.

"Bobby we knew to amputate it." He gave me the "you have got to be kidding me" look. I smiled and said, "No we don’t but your face was perfect, I wish I had a camara." Everyone laughed and he threw sand at me.

Ok, so as the girls helped him I counted who was there.

Me, Abby, Bobby, Brittany, Libby. Who was I missing? Oh, Andy, Mindy and that Ryan dude. The sun was starting to set so we needed to find them fast.

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