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 Created on 5-10-08
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Something viberated in my right pocket, I put my hand in it and pulled out my phone. My parents hadn’t taken it yet. It was a text from no one else but Kristen.
Kristen: So cutie where r we going for my b-day
I couldn’t tell her I couldn’t go she’d be crushed and it would ruin my chances with her.
Will: Well, it might be hard for me to get out of the house but, I was thinking of it being a surprise.
Kristen: Well, that sound great! :) Just pick me up at five and I’ll be waiting ttyl bye
I was dead if my parents found out. Maybe my mom would let me.
As I was about to walk out my door I ran into Faith.
"Willy, how was Kristen when you just talked to her?" How did she know it was her I was talking to.
"She was good, how did you," she stopped my in mid-sentence.
"You smile a lot when your done talking to her." She smiled and skipped to her room, humming a song.
I thought about as I was looking for my mom, I do seem to smile a lot when I’m around Kristen.
"MOM!!!" I yelled, once I couldn’t find her.
"What?" She was in her room with my dad.
"Hey mom can I talk to you alone?" Hinting my dad to leave. He got the clue.
I shut the door and sat on the bed next to my mom.
"Mom, before I was grounded Kristen told me that she wanted to hang out with me before the party," my mom looked up from her magazine, "and I wanted to take her out and surprise her with a great time but to get to the point can I go out before the party." She sat there, thinking about it.
She looked from the door to me and said so quiet that no one but me could hear her, "Will, if your father found out I’m letting you go he’d kill me." She smiled. Thats all I had to hear, now all I had to do was plan my night with the girl of my dreams.
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Please Login to post comments| On May 29th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Yay he gets to go out! Readng still :) |
| On May 11th 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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i luv dis story KMPP |
| On May 10th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said : | |
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Kmp, no Brian is sweet if you read " In His Eyes". |
| On May 10th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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that is really sweet and his father is an asshole...kmp |
