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I just hoped she didn’t like .........

 

One of my friends Toby. He was a great guy but since he was like me without a big folder in the police records, he got girls a lot.

"Ok so me, and you are going out on my birthday before the big party. Ok? Just me and you! Think of a great place to spoil me." Kristen walked away smiling. I was smiling too, just me and her. I was planning on this being a date she would remeber and love. Good thing I don’t have to wait long, since its tomorrow night.

First hour was a drag. Our teacher from the stone age kept talking about molecules and crap. Almost the whole class I was staring at Kristen. Even when she wore little make up, I personally think she looks better when she has non on but she always says What are you smokin’.

 

Next hour I had off and so did Andy, so we went out and played football.

The bell rang and it was finally lunch. Me, Andy, Mindy, Kristen, Toby and Adam went out.

"Ok so, what are we doing for Kristens birthday?" Toby asked once Mindy got her to go to the bathroom with her. I don’t get why women go together.

"What about before the party?"

Oh yeah our date, "No!" I screamed. Everyone looked at me.

"She has plans with a friend she already told me," I said covering up for my outburst. Nice save, everyone went back to talking about what to do for her.

The rest of school was boring, so I was happy to finally get home, until I realized I was going to get punished, but it was to late. I walked in the back door. And there was my mom and dad wait for me to come home.

My dad pointed to a chair as if commanding me to sit, and I did.

"Ok, so I realize Kristen’s party is tomorrow. I wouldn’t want you to loose a friend over being grounded, so," My mom looked at my dad as if she didn’t tell him about letting me off for that, "I’m going to let you go strait to the party and home. After that you will run by your dad with what you want to do. Other wise no going out, two weeks and your phone will turn off at night."

My dad just looked at my mom like, that’s it.

"Ok sounds good to me."

As I was walking up the stairs it hit me, I’m going out with Kristen before the party, hows that going to work?

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On May 29th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Reading still :)
On May 10th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh o shit that can't be good..kmp
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shadyishott ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i want 2 know wat happens so like KMPP
On May 9th 2008 Slackee Said :
Slackee Kmpp!!