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Creative Created on 5-6-08 Views(146) Story Rating G

I was out of breath, my legs screaming at me to stop. The sound of leaves crunching with every step I took. I didn’t have to turn around to know the police were still behind me. If I get caught my parents are going to kill me.

The blue and red lights dancing on the trees. If I could just get to the river, I would be able to loose them. I thought I saw something move in front of me but thought nothing of it. By the time the cop tackled me, I realized it was a line of police waiting for me to run past them.

They put the handcuffs on tight, they were out of breath and pissed that I had ran away. I was 16 and being slammed into the back of the police car. I wonder if any of my friends got caught too. I bet they were smart enough and got away.

The car slowly stopped in front of my house. It was dark, no lights on, yet. I was imagining my parents punishments. I’m going to be grounded for life. I just know it. No more tv, phone, music. Can’t go on dates, or dances. My thoughts interrupted by the officer pulling me out of the car and asking me, "So kid, do you think your parents are going to believe it was your friends fault like last time?"

"No, sir." I learned from my dad to say Mam, or no sir to cops.

His hand leaned out to ring the door bell. Right when I heard it go off inside, I knew it was only a matter of seconds before my parents opened the door, and I was right.

They glared at my while the officer said, "Brian, Tia we caught your son, again."

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On June 6th 2008 Sunloverz Said :
Sunloverz OMG THIS IS AMAZING :)
On June 5th 2008 wannahug13 Said :
wannahug13 love it!!
On May 29th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Oh wow! Still reading. I know I'm so behind.
On May 26th 2008 Atlangel5 Said :
Atlangel5 I like....... It got my attention
On May 7th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x omg!! plz kmp!
On May 6th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Haha, I agree with crazycutie7! THEY GOT SON! Kmppp
On May 6th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said :
Crazycutie7 Omg, they got a son!
On May 6th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh i like it but tell why he got caught it also catch's the reader's attention... kmp
On May 6th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
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