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Horror Created on 2-26-08 Views(82) Story Rating G

    It was like every other day. Came home from school, ate, took a nap, and then surfed the internet. I was always a big fan of horror films, so like every horror film finatic I thought of the worse.

     11 o' clock rolled around so I went to bed. I entered my room and felt eyes upon me. I dismissed it as my imagination. I layed down, and put the covers over my head. Eventually, I fell asleep.

     Around 3 am I awoke, and uncovered my head. The feeling of being watched came again. I opened my eyes to see something under my computer desk. It looked like the tip of rabbit ears. "I am still asleep" I murmurred. Then the ears began to raise. They were almost 3 feet long. I coward in fear under my blanket.

    Still not convinced I was awake, I looked out from under the covers one more time. My computer chair flew across the room, smashing into my door. Then dee, piercing green eyes slowly opened. "MOM...DAD" I screamed through my tears. "HELP".

    I heard my parents running through the hallway. I looked at the eyes. By this time I was hysterical. Screaming and crying. Frozen in fear. My parents was also yelling for me to unlock the door.

    I had not locked it, but I noticed the chair had completely nocked the handle off. I took a deep breathe, and darted to the door. Almost there I thought. My fingertips had just barely touched the wood when a hand that wrapped the whole way around my waist grabbed me.

    It slung me to the floor, and then stood on me. I felt its warm breathe on the nape of my neck. Frozen in fear, I made no sound. I could hear the creature sniffing for something. One of its gigantic claws pierced my thigh. I screamed in unbelieveable agony.

    CRACK! I looked up(almost unconcious from the pain). My dad was breaking throught the door. S small beakon of hope opened. Then the creature took flight. The force was so big I had to gasp for air. It busted through the cieling with me still in its death grip. A piece of tin from the roof had slit the back of my neck, almost severing my spinal cord.

    We had risen 100s of feet within seconds. I black circle slowly enclosed my vision. I passed out.....

 

     .....to be continued

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On February 26th 2008 dangg101 Said :
dangg101 Oww that HAD to uv hurt kmpp
On February 26th 2008 gikmo9 Said :
gikmo9 even with the typos the stories good. fantasy stories are the best. kmp
On February 26th 2008 tibbskidoo Said :
tibbskidoo owww...
On February 26th 2008 timmybedunah Said :
timmybedunah I know there is a few typos... last paragraph i meant A small beakon of hope.