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Dreama 2

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Creative Created on 2-9-09 Views(111) Story Rating G
Walking away while I sat frozen this strange man named Jasper spoke again. “your family has given you to me as a trade. They wanted you safe and me. Well your to young to understand that right now. I will train you, teach you everything I can. It will be hard but it will be worth it.” He started to walk away and with a wave of his hand had me follow. He showed me a room, with a bed and a single dresses. “this is your room now..do with it as you please…we start tomorrow” with that he left the room and shut the door leaving me in the dark. I searched the room trying to find something that would remind me of home. Nothing. Not even the color of the wood witch was the same as my old home was the same. Everything was different and scary.  And what was a 3 year old going to do with a room this size? I pretty much had to jump into the bed. It was way to big for me but in time I would grow and the bed wouldn't seem so scary.
                Early the next morning before the sun was even up I was getting a wake up call. When I didn't wake the first time a arrow was shot into my wall. I got up that time. Rubbing my eyes I walked to the kitchen to see jasper putting two bowls with weird looking soup stuff on the table. “is that for me” my young voice was squeaky. He just nodded his head and I climbed in. the soup was amazing. A lot better tasting than it look.
                After breakfast jasper took me into the study. There were thousands off books. I was in awe. The room was huge. Bigger than my old house alone. He told me this is were I would study my books. But it was easier to learn by seeing. We walked outside and back into the woods we want. He explained everything I saw or touched. From flowers to trees. To mountains to the water and all the animals that sccury about. I was in three year old heaven. After many hours of walking I started to get tired and when I thought I was going to fall over jasper held out a hand. “stay here and be quite. Watch and learn” his voice was quite. Almost to quite for me to hear what he said. He walked off and as he did pulled 2 swords out of his outfit. One long and one short. I heard what he must of heard and I stared after him. There were these little things running around in the filed before us and with quick easy strokes jasper had managed to stalk his pray  and kill them all. I was shocked and scared for my life.
                Replacing the swords jasper came came back to me. “goblins…they need more brain” and we were off again. “come Dreama. You have much to learn and not much time to learn it”. He took me back to his house then were I was given book and taught how to read them. Jasper was right when he said it was going to be hard work. By them time I got to bed that night I was dead tired.
                Each day was pretty much the same. Up early and out later. Lots of reading and more killing. But one morning when I woke, jasper was sitting at my side like he did every morning and there was a silver fluff ball next to me. A wolf. “he is yours. I will train him for you but when you are old enough you will take over. What would you like to name him?” I thought long and hard about that for about 3 minutes. “wolfie” I chimed and it was settled wolfie was mine and I couldn’t be happier.

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On February 17th 2009 brokenwings122 Said: 
brokenwings122 Its a bit vague at the moment, try putting more detail in. It will help lengthen the story as well. Also, try to vary your sentence length, they're all just quick quips without real structure. I'm interested to see where this goes.
On February 9th 2009 ShiningKanin Said: 
ShiningKanin sounds interesting so far... just watch for a few small spelling and capitalization errors. otherwise, pretty good so far!