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A TIME I'LL NEVER FORGET 1 (NATES POV)comment and rates pleae
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 Created on 1-21-09
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Dame it! How long does it take to get out of the car and into the freaking house. I was getting angry that it was taking so long. When in all truth it was only taken a few mins. I let my self look out the window one more time. The more I look The madder I get that's she not in the house yet. Rick Is getting her bags from the driver I hired. But I don't see her. Oh dear lord she didn't jump out of the car did she? I groan and slap myself fin the back of my head for that though. Of course she didn't she's just shy. I want to pull away from the window so that she doesn't see me standing there like a goof when she does get out. But I cant. Its like I'm a bug drawn to one of those bug light things. Oh wow Oh look she's getting out of the car. About dame time. My breath catches as she stands there, she's so much more prettier than in a picture.
Once again I try to pull myself away from the window. I managed to just hid behind the curtain and watch. She looks scared. She doesn't trust Rick. I don't blame her. She biting her lower lip. That means she nerves. I learned that from one of are many phone convos. Just looking at her makes my stomach turn. SO timid and shy is she. And so very cute. Yay she's smiling now and heading up the walkway. ok back to pacing. back and forth back and forth. I'm going to wear a hole in my floor. A moment latter Rick is in my room.
"Man you got yourself a good looking girl down there" Rick was Complete excited
"Ya hears the problem with that thou. Iv got to go in there and I don't think I can"
ME on the other hand was quite sure how I was felling.
"Oh come on, don't tell me your wimping out now. Not after all this time you spent talking about her"
Rick gives a full laugh with the last part.
"Maybe a little, What if she doesn't like me, what if this is all one big mastike"
I run my hands half way up my face and then let them drop. Iv never been this shy before. Have I?
"What if this What if that, your never going to know if you don't try"
Rick came over to me and gave me a quick pat on the back. With a shaky breath I take a step forward. but not before Rick gives me a shove that sends me out my bedroom door. Heading down the stairs I stop at the living room. Wow Its so hard to believe that she standing in MY living room. Looking at MY pictures. Well I guess there's no better time then now to make a fool of myself. "I really need to quite talking to myself" I mumble as I walk a little farther into the living room. Well here goes nothing
"Hi Sisi. I'm glad you could make it"
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On May 2nd 2009 chattyrocks Said: |
| i liked it i cant wait to read the rest |
| On January 23rd 2009 brokenwings122 Said: |
| Again, horrible spelling and grammar. Also, your sentence structure is comparable to a 5th grader. I like the plot, but I can't stand the errors, so best of luck to you. |
