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a pirates tale part 1: the escpace

a pirates tale part 1: the escpace

Creative Created on 12-27-06 Views(178) Story Rating G

Act 1

As a star desstoryer comes out of hyperspace. Then several small ships

start attacking it. The cpatian of the SD wants to know why the small

ships are attacking him and his SD. He oders his luitenit to hail the

lead ship. The lutenatant thaen states that lead ship is hailing them

and he responds. The leader of this gorup says he is the leader of

a group of space pirates and depends that they lower there shields

and surender. The captain says no and says he will preval. After a

heated battle the pirate leader comands everone to reatreat. The captian

demands a dammge report and then is told they need to drop sheilds to

restore them to maxium. Unkowing to the SD crew 2 people are still

floating in space suits waiting for the SD to drop shields. As the sheids

are droped the 2 people sneak inside the SD.


Act 2

The 2 people manage to steal uniforms and descise themselfs as

stromtroopers. The 2 manage to sneak around without alerting anyone

and they are about to find there prize. When the partner of the other

one says he is an impreail spy and that thats impreail porterty.

Brendhan then says he knew that he was a spy along and manges to escape

because he had his own plan. The spy then reports to the nearest officer

who takes him to the captian. The captian says he his men were not able

to capture brendhan and the spy then shoots the captian infroming everone

he is taking over as captian.


Act3

Brendhan is still hiding from his old comrade. While the new captian oders

Brendhans capture a high priorty he oders his new men to perpare for

battle. He then contacts his old friends but unlike brendhan they do know

of his treachory and they beleave him when he says mission acomplised.

The pirate ships then come out of hyperspace and he then oders the SD to

destory all the ships. Brendhan lucily is in near the weapons control

center and still in comuatation with the his pirate friends. Brendhan

then infroms them of the spys betreail. But it seems as though the spy

had really planed this out. As all the hpyerdrives are no longer

functuioning on the small ships. Brendhan then deicided to head to the

weapon control room but is captured by the troops before he can do

any damage. Brendhan is taken to the new captain and froced to watch as

the ships are destoryed.


Act4


Just as the spy/captian is about to kill Brendhan one other ship appears.

It appears as though they missed 1. Brendhan uses the discation to

get away while the ship is destoryed. The captian/spy oders the imitate

exection of brendhan and then oders the ship to the planet akkaban.

Brendhan realzies that his only hope of escaping the SD is to get to the

space suits so that he can drift into sapce and see if one the ships can

still run and or are still intact. As brendhan makes his way to the place

where he left his suit Brendhan sees that the space suits are being

placed into outerspace. And then brendhan realzies he has no hope of

escape.


To Be Contuiued...

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On July 25th 2007 showmeboobsbit Said :
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Arrrrrgh matey, this be a shitty story me hearty
On June 1st 2007 Yagelgirl Said :
Yagelgirl wow this good
On April 28th 2007 PattyFannin Said :
PattyFannin Reaching for the stars.
On April 28th 2007 MourningZephyr Said :
MourningZephyr good creativity.
On April 18th 2007 DarthBetty Said :
DarthBetty I liked it, but next time you write a story, write it in Microsoft Word or something so you can spell check it. I get the same way when I type because I'm so excited about my thouthts that I forget to check what I just said. Lol I liked it bunches.
On December 28th 2006 hollielewlove Said :
hollielewlove Pirates ARRRRRGH!!!
On December 28th 2006 DAtwinzz18 Said :
DAtwinzz18 did u make this up? its really good!!