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a pirates tale part 1: the escpace |
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Our trip to the carinval (part2)
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So me and my sister were watching the ride and were like wow this looks
scary. we both were gald cuz we seemed to both love scary rides. but
our younger siblings were a bit worried. so i said we would ride with
them each.
they both said yeah so it was agreed that i would go with my little
sister and my sister would go with our borther.
so frist my older sister went with my little borther now how it worked
was that he was letting people go on into one car one at a time so we
had to wait for our sister and brother to get set up.
they had no idea what to do because it was posible to control it and
deicde when u went upsidedown sometimes but did'nt know how to work it.
so he started them off and then said it was our turn to get on my
sister got in first and it was a bit cramped when i got in and was glad
my sister was kind of small.
anyways we started off and there was a bar with a latch u could pull up
or leave it the way it was my sister said to leave it the way it was
but i deicded to pull it up and well while the freiss wheal went up we
were going upside down. and then we went right back up.
my sister said dont do that agian please. but as we went up agian we
went upsidedown agian and then fliped forward i was a bit more
uncorfatble then scared and i think my sister was too.
i then asked my sister if she was having fun and she was saying kinda
its not as scary as i thought. but she really did not want me to pull
the lever because she said she was scared that if they stop the ride we
might get suck upsidedown.
plus it also it kinda hurts a bit when we go upsidedown. then for some
reason we did a really insane one at that moment and i could hear the
people in front or in back of us scareming i did'nt know about
christine and alex though.
but anyways i said lets just pull on it agian since we were not going
upsidedown anymore and my sister said go ahead. my sister seemed to be
having fun but felt a bit uncorfatble cuz as it went upsidedown agian
it really lasted longer then ussual and it really hurt as we felt like
we falling out of the restraints but they seemed to be doing there job
quite well.
and so just as we kind of seemed to be getting used to the ride we
stoped and we stoped the highest which sucked cuz it was really scary
up there.
my sister said this is fun and i was like yeah and then we started to
move agian but then stoped a second latter. we were both like ok wow it
feels like the rides broken. and then we started up agian and the guy
let us out and we saw that our sister and borther had just gotten out.
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| On July 25th 2007 showmeboobsbit Said : | |
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You type like a horse is trying to fuck the computer desk. Better grammar needed. Check for indentation and spelling. Story also seems to be going nowhere |
| On June 30th 2007 dreamlesleep Said : | |
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its still good. i still have to say the grammer thing but other then that i want to know whats going to happen next. jeep it up! |


