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Our trip to the carinval

Other Created on 6-29-07 Views(98) Story Rating G

before the story starts i would like to say that the caracthers except for me are fake.... also i am working on other parts and they should be up soon...

 

Me and my sister christine decided to head the carnival today
with our little borhter Alex and sister Victoria.

They were both very mature for there age alex was 13 just finshed

secenaday 1 and so did victoria.

She was suposed to be in the 5th grade this year but she skiped 2

grades last year.

Christine said she was going to drive us there she loved to drive

espascly when she drove our moms bmw and well our mom was not working

tonight so she said sure u can take it.

So we got to the carnival without insodent i was the the frist one out

of the car i guess i was porably the most excited too haha

My little bother and sister were still quite young and so they porably

would get a bit scared on some of the rides.

My sister said there were only 3 good looking rides the tilt a whirl

silzer and rock o plane.

laronde was better my sister said but wtv so we went to the ticket both

and got our tickets but we decided to get bracelets we had enough our

dad gave 100$ to spend.

so the frist ride we decided to go on was the tilt a whirl our younger

bother and sister said they wanted to ride with just each other and me

and my sister christine were ok with that.

So me and my sister got into one car together and our little borther

and sister got into another car right beside us.

we both were pertty excited about going but a bit worried about our

younger siblings since they were not exactly the bravest kids and well

our father froced them to go on the sligshot at laronde which is pertty

scary.

But they were a bit older since then and porably could handle something

as simple as the tilt a whril.

So the ride started me and my sister were like this is it for the frist

few momnets it was nothing for us. then it started spining a bit faster

which was cool.

Our younger silbings seemed to be haveing fun as well. which was pertty

cool and we both could not help but smile so pertty much we spun around

on the tilt whril.

So the ride ended we all got out and my sister said that was fun my

younger siblings said the same thing.

So we deicded to go try out the rock o plane.

The rock o plane was like a freis wheal that went upsidedown and i

figured me and my sister could handle it but i was not so sure about

our younger siblings.

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On July 25th 2007 showmeboobsbit Said :
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something better happen soon or I'll call animal welfare and get them to release you back into the wilderness
On June 30th 2007 dreamlesleep Said :
dreamlesleep its a good start, you might want to check some small grammer things but other then that i'm really looking forward to the ending!