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The Secret

Creative Created on 2-11-08 Views(308) Story Rating G

  1.             Jake sat on the bed facing her as she lay propped against some pillows on the bed. “It is so hot!” She moaned, fanning herself with her hands.
  2. He rubbed her belly in slow circles pausing every once in awhile as the baby kicked and moved against the pressure he put on her belly. She loved the look of total amazement every time the baby kicked. It made the baby real, not just an idea but a real tangible living thing that would soon be there with them. The thing that would make them a real family.
  3. “If it’s a girl, I hope she has your smile.” Jake said looking up and catching her smiling at him. “You know that’s what I first noticed about you? You have a gorgeous mouth.” He leaned in for a kiss. “You have always been the most beautiful woman; I hope she takes after you.”
  4. “If it is a girl and she does look like me you may regret that wish when she is old enough to date.” she laughed when his smile dropped.
  5. In a completely serious tone he said “Date?”
  6. Keri laughed again and settled back as he resumed rubbing her belly. “When I have our son, I hope he has your sense of humor.”
  7.                 “Still thinking you’re having a boy do you?” He creased his brow as the baby kicked hard against his hand. “It is awfully strong.”
  8. “I know I am.  I am having a boy and he will be just like you.”
  9. “Nah, you sound like you’re trying to convince yourself, hoping. When you have our daughter,” Jake smiled, “I hope she has your heart.”
  10. Keri’s smile faltered as he said this. “What do you mean?”
  11. “I mean your heart for people. How you care for everyone and how they all can’t help but love you.” He stopped as he realized what he had said. “I’m sorry sweetheart. That came out wrong.”
  12. “It’s okay.” She said it with a smile on her face, but it was strained. “Forget about it, I’m trying to.” She rolled onto her side to face him better.
  13. “Forget about it? How can you forget about that?” He said cupping her face. “I think we need to deal with this before the baby gets here. I don’t want her picking up suppressed feelings later and think anything is wrong.”
  14. “You are a great man Jake; I just know this baby is yours!”
  15. “Calm down Keri.” He said it soothing the few wisps of hair that had escaped her ponytail. He played with the soft curls, “You know you can’t get worked up, you need to rest.”
  16. “But”
  17. “No buts sweetheart,” Jake interrupted, “This baby is mine no matter what alright? No matter what the tests say. I promise I won’t leave you. Will you take them now?”
  18. Keri shook her head no. “If you are staying no matter what, then why find out for sure? Why does it matter?”

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On August 23rd 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 wow i like it
On March 3rd 2008 Sammybabe92 Said :
Sammybabe92 great story!!loved it!!
On February 18th 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei This sounds interesting.
On February 14th 2008 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 Intriguing...You should definitely write more! :) I love the little twist at the end about the fact that Jake might not be the father. Good opening for a great story!!!!!! :D
On February 12th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter I don't really get the ending but please kmp!
On February 12th 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 really good,. KMP!
On February 12th 2008 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae wow. keep me posted if you write more!!!
On February 12th 2008 individulsong Said :
individulsong This is great! KMP!
On February 11th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz nice. keep me posted!
On February 11th 2008 lovehungercree Said :
lovehungercree How sweet! Keep it up! Post me when the next one comes out.
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On February 11th 2008 lonely244444 Said :
lonely244444 Awww how sweet
On February 11th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 Jake seems sweet! kmp plz
On February 11th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 awww I like it keep em posted.
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xPunkxVanityx this is really good. keep me psoted please.
On February 11th 2008 Darkrose3 Said :
Darkrose3 I would like to read more so please keep me posted
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On February 11th 2008 tece26 Said :
tece26 Let me know if you would like to see more.