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The Mystery of Survival ~8~

Tragedy Created on 1-21-08 Views(209) Story Rating G

  1.                 As Rosie waited by her log, James worked his way farther into the thickest part of the grove of trees. He needed just the right spot, one not too hard to find but far enough off the “path” they were following. He listened to Rosie rambling on behind him and knew she was scared. But she was trying so hard to be brave now and he knew she felt bad about making him come. Truth was he was glad he had come. To be with Rosie when she needed him most and to let her know things were going to be ok.
  2. He stopped and braced himself against a tree. The loss of blood and the pain from his side made it almost impossible to stand up straight. But he could see it, the spot he was looking for. He stumbled forward, the world around him spinning and rushing up to meet him. Then he hit the ground hard and let out a scream as his whole body was slammed into the cold earth. He grabbed his side, then his leg, his head… It hurt so bad everywhere he didn’t know what to do first. He took a few deep breaths and pulled out the letter he had written to Rose.
  3. Staring down at it he heard Rose calling out to him, “Jay? Are you okay? Need any help? I heard you scream.”
  4. “NO! Stay there. I’m fine just tripped. I’ll be out in a minute.”
  5. This letter he had written before they left, now he slowly opened the seal, and began to write more.
  6. Rose sat on the cold log for what seemed like forever. Her body was getting stiff and she knew if they didn’t continue on soon they would be lucky just to make it to the road again by night. The thought of walking hat treacherous road at night, or worse, having to camp out on it with no protection made her shiver. She stood up to stretch. He has been gone for awhile she thought, maybe I should go check on him. And then she heard him scream.
  7. “Jay? Are you okay?” she walked toward the trees. “Need any help? I heard you scream.”
  8. When she received his answer she stayed by the edge of trees. James was a very strong man, but she doubted if he would ever ask for help. I’ll give him ten more minutes and then I’m going in there.  She decided. And after ten minutes she started pushing back the limbs in her way to follow James.
  9. “Rosie?” She heard it from behind her and up the mountain a bit more. “There you are. I couldn’t find you where I left you.” James said looking down at her. “I thought I told you to stay put.”
  10. “Jay! How did you get up there? I thought…” she looked back at the trees, “I thought you were hurt I didn’t see you come out.”
  11. “I’m sorry hun, I’m a little weak so instead of just wasting energy going back and forth, I walked up while walking back.” James explained. “I didn’t mean to worry you.”
  12. “Oh, it’s fine hun, you doing okay? That sounded like a painful scream.”
  13. “Yep!” He smiled down to her, “Now come on! We need to hurry and get some help before dark.” With that he turned and continued picking a path up the mountain. Pointing out areas to be careful of as Rose followed.
  14. She noticed that he seemed a bit quieter, and that worried her. So in her attempts to not think about the negative she kept up a steady stream of conversation. It was more to keep the quiet away so she didn’t mind much when James wouldn’t answer her.
  15. “I bet there are people looking for us right now! I know we didn’t tell anyone where we were going, but when I didn’t call Andrea this morning like I was going too to tell her I couldn’t go out for our run, she probably came over. She would have waited all day and saw the mess we left. I just know she will know something is up. If not by this morning then definitely by tonight. And maybe someone is missing our mystery man! He was definitely in a hurry to get somewhere so someone noticed he was gone! Yeah… and someone will trace his steps and the accident must have left some evidence…” As she continued on she got more and more excited.
  16. “Jay! Don’t you think so!” James turned to look down at her, smiled a sad little smile then turned his attention back to his climb. Something is seriously wrong she thought.

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On January 23rd 2008 Darkrose3 Said :
Darkrose3 hmm..what is that letter about? This is the question that haunts me! plz kmp!
On January 23rd 2008 Smarties4 Said :
Smarties4 The letter is intriguing! Awesome job! Keep me posted :)
On January 22nd 2008 beccaboo073189 Said :
beccaboo073189 gah! lol. kmp, this is great!
On January 22nd 2008 unknownwolfie Said :
unknownwolfie once again BRILLIANT!!!!!!! GREAT JOB BABES, UR SUCH A CLIFFHANGER! LOV IT
On January 22nd 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz omgggkmp!
On January 22nd 2008 jenni24014 Said :
jenni24014 on the edge of my seat... when's the next part gonna be ready?!
On January 22nd 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess Please dont let him die. I am so into this story. Please KMP.
On January 22nd 2008 melibeans10 Said :
melibeans10 OH MY GOD!! i hope he doesnt die..
On January 21st 2008 username685 Said :
username685 wow kmp plz
On January 21st 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Oh no; is Jay gonna die? *tears stream down face* :'( man you're awesome at those cliff hangers
On January 21st 2008 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss nice.
On January 21st 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX Please keep me posted. Awesome story.
On January 21st 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 KMP i love it
On January 21st 2008 missin0you0ada Said :
missin0you0ada kmp
On January 21st 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex kmp
On January 21st 2008 DaKay Said :
DaKay omgggkmp!
On January 21st 2008 Sammybabe92 Said :
Sammybabe92 oooo i luv these storys!Great job!keep me posted please!
On January 21st 2008 Laralei Said :
Laralei You always choose such great ending points for these chapters. You have a great mastery of the "cliff hanger"