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Forbidden pt 1

Fiction Created on 2-17-08 Views(56) Story Rating G

'so you like will, Zoey?'

she asked egarly waiting for an answer, ignoring her i focused all my attention on will, forbidden fruit was always the nicest. I called over for a refreshment, "oi bar bitch, two more'.

Glancing at him i watched his every movement not allowing him to make a move i didn't know about, he smiled as he strolled over to our table.

'is that all ladies?'

i looked him i the eyes, and pulled him closer, ' you will do fine' i whispered,smiling he left our table. I still didn't glance away.

Kelly persisted with her questions, after what seemed like hours, i gave in.

'yes and i'm going to make him mine.' 

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On February 17th 2008 brokenwings122 Said :
brokenwings122 I agree with Sk8ncutie001, you really should writie longer pieces. This length is really only acceptable for a prologue or intro. Write longer with more detail. If you do, kmp.
On February 17th 2008 Sk8ncutie001 Said :
Sk8ncutie001 Ur not gonna get any ratings unless theyre LONGER!