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The unknown
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 Created on 2-27-08
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 Story Rating G
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Eyes wide open, which is usually strange because she sleeps through the night. Nor hungary or cold she wonders why she had awaken from her slumber. Darkness filled her room she cannot see anything,not even her own hands. As she turns to her side she notice that her door is wide open "had someone come in'', she mummers to herself. As her naked foot steps on the wooden floor.she felt a chillen cold wind this surprise her because she had not open any windows something is drawing her to the door,as she moves to the door a squeaking noise follows her.Slowly peering out to an angle she sees a dark figure which frightens her she did not know what or who it was it had no characteristics of eyes, nose or mouth. It wore what seems to be a cloak with the hood buring its face. She is unable to move or speak but to only stare and wonder what this apparition were.Fear had paralyzed her or was it this thing. As it slowly moves towards her she can only manage to say help but it comes out as dying letters that floats to the ground.It steps closer and closer she can only watch and wait for the unknown.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On March 4th 2008 martianmike Said : | |
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suspenseful |
| On February 27th 2008 C4444 Said : | |
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WOW!!!!,I wonder if there is more to the story good job. kmp.... :) |
| On February 27th 2008 lovehungercree Said : | |
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FREAKY!!! I like it. |
