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Olive the Warrior pt. 2: Caged and Beaten
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 Created on 7-26-07
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Now obviously six year-olds in this world were more advanced than 6 year-olds in our world, but their brains were still only as developed as the ones here. Their world was also very similar to ours, almost exactly the same.
Olive, being a six year-old, ran on instinct, and now his instincts were screaming revenge. They killed his father, and made him kill his own mother. He lost all sight of reason and fell to a vengeful bloodlust. They were watching all of this, and were anticipating what he was going to do. He left the house, knife in hand, and headed toward an area known to have dealings with Them. He was going to get some answers at all costs.
When he arrived in Al Dego village They were already waiting. As he approached the town square a man dressed in a suit and tie stepped forward and smiled. “So Olive, you have come to avenge your parents, but wouldn’t you prefer answers?” the man said as he walked toward the center of the open space between Olive and Them. “Oh, I can give you answers, like… why we killed your parents. Or, perhaps, you’d like to know how you can save your own life.”
“This grudge has gone on far too long Alxonad, and you crossed the line with this, and you will pay for it.” Olive said as he moved closer. Alxonad began walking in a circular motion to his right, as he did so, he motioned for Them to step back and not interfere. “But first, why did you kill them?” Olive said as he too began moving to his right, his grip on the knife tightening.
“Because, you were an expense we could afford to get rid of, you can’t be trusted. We had hoped you’d have taken our warning and disappeared. Yet here we are, you’re a fool Olive, you can never kill me, you’re only six.” Alxonad lunged at Olive, pulling a sword out of nowhere and swinging it as he flew over Olive who had ducked underneath him. As Alxonad flew over him, Olive thrust his knife upward, and caught Alxonad in the abdomen, and used the knife to pull him to the ground and landed on top of him, pulling the knife down the entire length of Alxonad’s abdomen.
“No, you are a fool for awakening and invoking the rage of a god,” Olive said as he stared unblinkingly into Alxonad’s eyes. “I would have left you alone and never bothered you again, but you went and did something stupid like this. I have no pity or mercy for you, and you will feel every single bit of pain that they felt,” he said as Alxonad began to scream, he could see something inside of Olives eyes, and it was the most terrifying thing he had ever seen.
The being came from Olive’s eyes and enveloped Alxonad’s entire body, it slowly feasted on his life-force, causing untold amounts of endless pain. As the demon slowly wound down Alxonad’s life to only a few years Olive had to leave the room as the demon finished it because the screams were too much for him to take.
They knew that there was nothing they could do to help their leader, and so they chased after Olive. As he ran Olive knew that they’d be following him, so he kept turning down new passage ways every few minutes so as to make it harder for them to find him. As he rounded a corner he came to a stop as fast as he could, They were all standing there. He was about to turn and run back the way he came when he noticed that several of them appeared to be owing to him, he stopped and look. No, they were all bowing to him.
Obviously confused by this strange turn of events, Olive began once more to turn and run, but something else caught his attention this time. “Please don’t leave us sir,” said the man closest to him. “Sir???” Olive said questioningly. “You killed our leader, anytime you kill one of us, you assume that person’s role in the community… since you killed our leader, you assume his role, thus YOU are our new leader.” the man stated. Olive was taken aback, could it be a trick, they’re trying to lull hum into a false sense of security, or are they telling the truth? Olive couldn’t decided, so he thought that he’d pretend to believe them for a little while, and then if anything happens, he’ll leave.
So Olive followed them back to the Throne Room, and They watched as he took a seat on the thone which Alxonad once sat just earlier that day. Everyone bowed to him. “Bring me the sacred texts.” Olive demanded as his first order to his people, they did so with great haste. He began flipping through all the pages in all the books, after several hours finally finding what he was looking for.
He stood up raised his arms, then brought them down in a strange but oddly beautiful manner. He repeated this several times then recited a strange but equally beautiful chant. Then stopped and just stood there, after a few moments, his head dropped and he climbed back to the throne, appearing to be highly depressed. Just then, right where he had been standing, the ground was waving, looking almost like water as it did so. Then two figures began to form right above the ground.
One was a woman, the other a man. The others were shocked. No spell cast from the sacred texts has ever really worked, the most they had ever gotten out of them was a spark and some noises. Olive laughed at their stupidity. Then flipped to another page in the book he currently held. Suddenly the whole building began to shake. Demons began flying in from everywhere, each one attaching itself to one of Them, as they all began to fall victim to the same fate as their old leader.
Olive grabbed his parents and ran. When they made it back to their house, all the blood and everything was gone. They were all happy that they were together once again, and now that They had been all destroyed there was no reason to fear anything anymore. They rejoiced in how the day turned from the worst that any of them had ever known, into the most wonderful.
“Olive! get back to work and stop daydreaming!” his teacher yelled at him. He smiled at another completed adventure and enjoyed it so much that he decided they’d get only more evil from now on, as he went back to coloring the picture that his teacher had handed out as an “assignment” (obviously she was just tweakin’ and just didn’t want to grade papers cause she had a principal to go seduce at lunchtime (he was going to fire her if she didn’t cause she failed a drug test))
THE END!!!
Olive, being a six year-old, ran on instinct, and now his instincts were screaming revenge. They killed his father, and made him kill his own mother. He lost all sight of reason and fell to a vengeful bloodlust. They were watching all of this, and were anticipating what he was going to do. He left the house, knife in hand, and headed toward an area known to have dealings with Them. He was going to get some answers at all costs.
When he arrived in Al Dego village They were already waiting. As he approached the town square a man dressed in a suit and tie stepped forward and smiled. “So Olive, you have come to avenge your parents, but wouldn’t you prefer answers?” the man said as he walked toward the center of the open space between Olive and Them. “Oh, I can give you answers, like… why we killed your parents. Or, perhaps, you’d like to know how you can save your own life.”
“This grudge has gone on far too long Alxonad, and you crossed the line with this, and you will pay for it.” Olive said as he moved closer. Alxonad began walking in a circular motion to his right, as he did so, he motioned for Them to step back and not interfere. “But first, why did you kill them?” Olive said as he too began moving to his right, his grip on the knife tightening.
“Because, you were an expense we could afford to get rid of, you can’t be trusted. We had hoped you’d have taken our warning and disappeared. Yet here we are, you’re a fool Olive, you can never kill me, you’re only six.” Alxonad lunged at Olive, pulling a sword out of nowhere and swinging it as he flew over Olive who had ducked underneath him. As Alxonad flew over him, Olive thrust his knife upward, and caught Alxonad in the abdomen, and used the knife to pull him to the ground and landed on top of him, pulling the knife down the entire length of Alxonad’s abdomen.
“No, you are a fool for awakening and invoking the rage of a god,” Olive said as he stared unblinkingly into Alxonad’s eyes. “I would have left you alone and never bothered you again, but you went and did something stupid like this. I have no pity or mercy for you, and you will feel every single bit of pain that they felt,” he said as Alxonad began to scream, he could see something inside of Olives eyes, and it was the most terrifying thing he had ever seen.
The being came from Olive’s eyes and enveloped Alxonad’s entire body, it slowly feasted on his life-force, causing untold amounts of endless pain. As the demon slowly wound down Alxonad’s life to only a few years Olive had to leave the room as the demon finished it because the screams were too much for him to take.
They knew that there was nothing they could do to help their leader, and so they chased after Olive. As he ran Olive knew that they’d be following him, so he kept turning down new passage ways every few minutes so as to make it harder for them to find him. As he rounded a corner he came to a stop as fast as he could, They were all standing there. He was about to turn and run back the way he came when he noticed that several of them appeared to be owing to him, he stopped and look. No, they were all bowing to him.
Obviously confused by this strange turn of events, Olive began once more to turn and run, but something else caught his attention this time. “Please don’t leave us sir,” said the man closest to him. “Sir???” Olive said questioningly. “You killed our leader, anytime you kill one of us, you assume that person’s role in the community… since you killed our leader, you assume his role, thus YOU are our new leader.” the man stated. Olive was taken aback, could it be a trick, they’re trying to lull hum into a false sense of security, or are they telling the truth? Olive couldn’t decided, so he thought that he’d pretend to believe them for a little while, and then if anything happens, he’ll leave.
So Olive followed them back to the Throne Room, and They watched as he took a seat on the thone which Alxonad once sat just earlier that day. Everyone bowed to him. “Bring me the sacred texts.” Olive demanded as his first order to his people, they did so with great haste. He began flipping through all the pages in all the books, after several hours finally finding what he was looking for.
He stood up raised his arms, then brought them down in a strange but oddly beautiful manner. He repeated this several times then recited a strange but equally beautiful chant. Then stopped and just stood there, after a few moments, his head dropped and he climbed back to the throne, appearing to be highly depressed. Just then, right where he had been standing, the ground was waving, looking almost like water as it did so. Then two figures began to form right above the ground.
One was a woman, the other a man. The others were shocked. No spell cast from the sacred texts has ever really worked, the most they had ever gotten out of them was a spark and some noises. Olive laughed at their stupidity. Then flipped to another page in the book he currently held. Suddenly the whole building began to shake. Demons began flying in from everywhere, each one attaching itself to one of Them, as they all began to fall victim to the same fate as their old leader.
Olive grabbed his parents and ran. When they made it back to their house, all the blood and everything was gone. They were all happy that they were together once again, and now that They had been all destroyed there was no reason to fear anything anymore. They rejoiced in how the day turned from the worst that any of them had ever known, into the most wonderful.
“Olive! get back to work and stop daydreaming!” his teacher yelled at him. He smiled at another completed adventure and enjoyed it so much that he decided they’d get only more evil from now on, as he went back to coloring the picture that his teacher had handed out as an “assignment” (obviously she was just tweakin’ and just didn’t want to grade papers cause she had a principal to go seduce at lunchtime (he was going to fire her if she didn’t cause she failed a drug test))
THE END!!!
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