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survival of the misfits (part five)

Creative Created on 3-31-08 Views(36) Story Rating G

What is it Claire?then i looked over at Keke and she was trying to get up. "Keke!Keke!" i screamed as i jumped over to her."are you ok? please! Keke! no!don't go back asleep!!!!!!!" Shadow pulled me off of her with surprising strength. "no!NO!" i was sobbing now. Keke was the only friend i ever had. she can't leave me! she just CAN'T! "Raven!" Shadow said sharply. "she will be alright. you need to calm down." i was talking to myself now. "no no no...shes ok! shes right here! shes talking to me! she is! I CAN HEAR HER!" only Keke knew i wasn't mentally stable. i looked up at Shadow and Claire. their lips were moving but i couldn't hear them. i looked back at Keke. she slowly sat up. "Keke! your all right!" i ran over to her hospital bed and hugged her still sobbing. "its ok now Raven. look! im ok!" she said then two strong doctors pulled me off her. "NO! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" i looked back and they were pulling a blanket over Keke's face. "what? no! shes alive! i CAN still hear her!!!!!!! Then i felt a sharp pain in my arm. i started to feel woozy and tired. "no..." i whispered. then i blacked out. it must have been hours later when i woke up because i was in a padded cell with a pounding head ache. "What happened?" i said. then i remembered. Keke was alive! i saw her! but...but,she can't be dead...i realized she never talked to me. she isn't still alive. shes gone. she left me! i curled up in a corner sobbing and feeling completely alone. shes gone! i thought. shes dead! and its all Emma's fault! i sat up still sniffling but now full of rage. "I'M GONNA KILL YOU EMMA!!!!!!!" i shrieked. i heard voice over the intercom in my cell. "Raven? can you hear us? i need you to calm down ok?" "who are you?" i sobbed. "Raven?" it was a new voice. "its me Shadow Raven. they said they will let me go in and visit you if you can calm down ok?" "alright." then a door opened and Shadow and Claire walked in. "Claire?" i whimpered. "its alright Raven...shhh..." she came over and sat next to me. i cried in her arms for about twenty minutes. "Keke's dead Claire." i cried more. "Emma killed her!" "yes. i know Raven." "Claire?" "yes?" i sighed. "we need to find Emma.i am going to kill her."  Claire looked over at Shadow and waved him towards us. then she whispered,"they can hear us...shhh..." then she added," i know Raven,we will help you find her." then Shadow added,"and her father.and their Prep Club." i looked around. "i have to get out of here." "i know." shadow answered."i have a plan."

to be continued.......

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On April 2nd 2008 xxpunkchik89xx Said :
xxpunkchik89xx uu a plan.yes!!
On March 31st 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 NOOO!!!She died too early!! *cry*.kick emmas ass =P
On March 31st 2008 gikmo9 Said :
gikmo9 well they could always lure the people to them instead of going looking for them.
On March 31st 2008 spongbobsgirl Said :
spongbobsgirl dun dun dun!!! if u guys have any ideas for the plan plz tell me cuz i got no ideas! i hope you likey!