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survival of the misfits (part two)

Creative Created on 3-29-08 Views(38) Story Rating G

Keke and i walked toward the bushes carefully.i saw a shadow fall out from behind the bush.all the sudden it froze and a quiet voice said,"oh shit." Keke and i looked at each other."who are you? come out and we wont hurt you." a nervous looking girl crawled out from behind the bush."im sorry.please dont hurt me." i passed a confused look to Keke. "Raven,do yo know who this is?" "no, do you Keke?" the girl looked at us. "im sorry!!!" she repeated. "why are you sorry?" she looked at us puzzled. "your not with Emma?" she asked. "uhhh, no,i just beat the crap out of her" snickered Keke. "well then, i guess were in the same side right?"asked the girl."im Claire by the way." "so why are you here Claire?" asked Keke. they talked quietly but suddenly i heard a small crack of a twig snapping. i looked at Keke and Claire but they didn't notice. i reached into my pocket and grabbed my switchblade knife. i surveyed the surroundings and noticed that one shadow seemed darker and out of place. i watched silently as it creeped towards me. when it was right behind me i whirled around and held my knife to the persons neck.  Claire and Keke were startled and and jumped to their feet. the boy i was holding the knife to was pale with long jet black hair and black eyes. not just dark,black. just like mine.we looked into each others eyes and i gasped and fell back. whats wrong with me? why cant i move? he kept staring in my eyes. "hey!" yelled Claire,"shes with me." suddenly i could move. i quickly stood up and backed towards Keke. "who are you?"i demanded"what are you?" Keke whispered.Claire walked toward him and said,"don't worry, hes with me." "im shadow." he said in a whisper like voice. "and im a normal person with a special secret." i gave him one long stare and said,"we have the same eyes. i share your secret." Keke looked at me and asked,"what are you talking about Raven?" she was scared.i could tell. "you have a secret too." i said quietly."and so do i. just not the same one." i turned to shadow.

to be continued... 

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