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what the hek?
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 Created on 7-23-07
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The moon is looking so nice tonight. I'm lying alone on the field in the middle of the night. Then I see these clouds blocking the fantastic moonlight. I'm disapointed of that.
Then I hear thumps of footsteps coming closer to me. I'm afraid to look over my shoulder, but I do anyway. I see a little girl. What is she doing out here alone? I ask myself.
The little girl starts mumbling about rubish as she come closer. Then I hear what she's saying. It's some sort of weird chant I've heard in a movie... I can't remember.
I'm getting really freaked out here. She's looking at me with those blood shot eyes. They get brighter, then her voice starts to get louder as well. I'm afraid to look at her but something inside of me just can't look away.
I close my eyes tightly. When I open my eyes... If I can open my eyes, what will I see? Quickly I open my eyes. My jaw drops. I'm somewhere somewhat magical. Different creatures and plants.
When I get up the grass wrapes around my feet. The feeling of my heart beating is scarying myself. What the hell am I doing here. I want to get out as soon as possible.
"HELP!"
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Please Login to post comments| On September 2nd 2007 xlollipopgurlx Said : | |
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great but i think you should have elaborated a bit one what types of diff. creatures and plants she saw. it would give a sense of how weird the place was. but its cool! post me |
| On July 24th 2007 XxEMOxBITCHxX Said : | |
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its good write more write more! |
| On July 24th 2007 soothmysoul Said : | |
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thanx. I got the picture
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| On July 23rd 2007 iloveskating12 Said : | |
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interesting but i still like it |
| On July 23rd 2007 iloveskating12 Said : | |
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interesting but i still like it |
| On July 23rd 2007 iloveskating12 Said : | |
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interesting but i still like it |
