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Creative Created on 6-13-07 Views(159) Story Rating G

Hey sorry this one is short, I didn't wanna keep ya'll waiting.

 

         

            I decided to head straight for the 6ft half pipe. Maybe if I got enough speed I could kick flip the spine transfer. Well all or nothing now that i'm ready to drop in. I drop in and hear my friends cheering me on. I hit the other side air out and now i’m headed straight for the spine! I ollied just in time and get the kick flip now just to land. I over shot the landing a little bit but I land cleanly.             After that Dustin decided he wants to make some skate videos to post on you tube. He wants me get speed of the quarter pipe board slide the kink rail, Ollie the picnic table then land in a front manual. WOW this will be hard I thought but it’s worth a try. I didn’t succeed in what seemed like all day. After a burger king break I decided to try one last time. I did it but had a sloppy landing. Shane yells out "Come on you wimp make the video perfect!" so I decide to try it again to get a clean landing. When the picnic table came up I didn’t Ollie high enough and hit the table. I landed on the table but my leg got stuck between the seat and table. The pain was the worst I have ever felt.

             “AHH My leg! Jon come quick!” I cried out. “Oh man, major wipe out girl!” Jon said running over. I started to cry, “Where’s Jeremie?” “Uhm... Him, Anthony, Tamara, Your Brother, and His friends were all still at Burger King last I kn…. Sammy your Ankle!!” I looked down. “Ohh shouldn’t have done that” I thought to myself. It was all twisted in directions that weren’t suppose to exist! I clutched at Jon’s shirt as Dustin attempted to free my leg from the bench. “Okay...”  “Justin, Dave” Dustin said “Go get them quickly!”

 

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On July 5th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 Good job. Unexpected twist.
On June 18th 2007 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth ok I like this, will you message me when you have more?
On June 15th 2007 onikboy Said :
onikboy ouchies, omg, is there a number 3!?
On June 14th 2007 dcmartin21 Said :
dcmartin21 dam talk about pain, i look forward to hearing more so let me know win part 3 is here:)
On June 13th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx ow... can't wait for more!
On June 13th 2007 grassfairy02 Said :
grassfairy02 ouch, but i like it! keep it up!
On June 13th 2007 xXRheBabesXx Said :
xXRheBabesXx Oh ouch!!!! Write more!!!