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Creative Created on 6-11-07 Views(250) Story Rating G

*AUTHORS NOTE* This is my first actual story so if you see anything wrong with it let me know. Thanks and Enjoy!!

 

Samantha's the name, Samantha Leah Smith to be exact, but everyone calls me Sam or Sammy. Your probably wondering were I’m at right? Well I’m on bed rest till tomorrow; actually to be honest I put myself on bed rest. Why? Well that’s a long story.... We were at our family reunion, and every year we were allowed to choose a few friends to bring with us. Well me and my brothers have most of the same friends since David and I are twins, and Jeremie is only 10 years older then us (he's 25 we're 15). So naturally David brought his girlfriend Katie and his two best friends Ryan and Jim, while I brought my boyfriend Anthony and my two best friends Jon and Tamara. As usual Jeremie didn't bring anyone. "Sammy!" Jon called out, "Over here" I said. "Your brother wants you, says it's important" "haha" I laughed nervously "which one?" "Jeremie silly" came the simple reply. "Alright alright, tell him I’m on my way, just lemme grab my skateboard." "Okay." I grabbed my board and went over to where Jeremie was standing. "Alright butthead, what’s so important?" "Well!" Jeremie said, "If your gonna be like that, I won't take you to the skate park." "OMG Jeremie, your the best! Dad actually said it was okay?" "Yupp gave me the keys to the truck too." "AGHHHH!!! Lemme go get Anthony, Jon, and Tamara... Think David and His friends will want to come too?" "Haha your kidding right? Look Sammy, I think David would kill us if you didn't tell him." "Ha yeah your right, he sure does love to skateboard doesn't he?" "Yeah whatever sis, go get them quickly." So off I went to go tell them what Jeremie said, they were all so excited, but then again who wouldn't be? We decided to race back to the truck to see who would get the front seat. I won of course; So Anthony and I got to sit in the front seat with Jeremie while the rest sat in the back. "So Jeremie." I asked "Yeah Squirt?" "Why'd you decide to take us to the skate park?" "Ha well I was bored and figured you guys probably were too. Besides Melissa lives across the street remember?" "How could I forget?" I mumbled softly, Jeremie still heard me though and hit the back of my head. "Very funny Sam." We pulled into the parking lot then, and Jeremie yelled "Everyone out!" This really wasn’t necessary considering they were halfway out when we pulled in. “Hey look!" Jim shouted, "Isn't that Reba, Felicia, Justin, Jeffrey, Shane, Dave, and Dustin?" "Yeah!" I replied "Hey guys!" "Dude, Sammy!" Dustin said "You just missed Tyler and his friends." "Ha" I said "Figures, oh well, we can chill with them later, right now though, Lets tear this place apart!!"

 

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On July 5th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 this is pretty good so far
On June 25th 2007 smartalec1 Said :
smartalec1 sorry i ment to put chapter 3 will go up shortly
On June 25th 2007 smartalec1 Said :
smartalec1 The next Chapter will be up shortly sorry i havn't gotten to it lately i've been busy.
On June 12th 2007 dcmartin21 Said :
dcmartin21 nice i wnat to read number 2 now:)
On June 11th 2007 Aegle Said :
Aegle i like it and it gots my intrest cuz i'm a skatergirl too. So you got yer'self a loyal reader here
On June 11th 2007 LokiSeto Said :
LokiSeto Alright. The flow was easy and smooth. Get some paragraphs going. Every complete thought is a paragraph. Extend the drive about. What about backgrounds? You have done really well in getting speech done. That is usually a real trouble for many. So work on backgrounds and paragraphs. And maybe cut down on the characters.
On June 11th 2007 destaneybreann Said :
destaneybreann it needs more detail but i like it
On June 11th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said :
xxcassiejayxx yep, love it:)